cool! i loved it!

Wow. This writng style is perfect for a one-shot. This is one of those writings that conveys feelings instead of a story. Feelings are a little harder to follow, but you end up with more insight. Thanks for a break from the usual. Great stuff, this.

Wow Luna...Tis really good.
You should NEVER leave fanfiction for so long again!
(please answer my email- I sent it to the one you have listed for fanfiction) looking forward to more stories ~Tipix

That was so beautiful I loved it so much! You are really a greeat author!

-Jasmine xoxox

Dear Luna,
I love the story. It was amazing. Your writing skills are incredible and I loved the sense of suspense you had near the end. Your words painted a perfect picture in my head of the Garden. keep writing because it is so wonderful!

:) Choas Dame

I liked it... marvelous writing. Keep up the great work.