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Radical Pretense Gothica
2007-11-23
ch 2,
abusebummer
gnbrules
2006-11-01
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat story is amazing. Poetic, even. It made me cry and I loved it.
coexist love
2005-09-29
ch 2,
abuse*sobs hysterically*

It was wonderful!! Amazingly crafted. Good job.
BlunderousBlueBrigade
2005-09-23
ch 2,
abusei almost cried that was so good. somehow listening to because of you by kelly clarkson makes it even sadder, that is if that is a word. so good, so sad, very good.
Midnightdreamr
2005-09-23
ch 2,
abuseThey both were so sad! AH! Poor Nicky, and Sara. That was a tear jerker! AH! This was great!
csi
2005-07-27
ch 1, anon.
abusewhat is it with sara dying in practically all the tragedy stories?!! Please kill someone else for a change
Clazziquai
2005-07-17
ch 2,
abuseYou got me all teary.

"This night was like any other night. Nothing seemed to be any different. But if I only knew then what I know now, I would have told you all the things I may never get to say."

How true this is. We all regret not doing things until it's too late.
Clazziquai
2005-07-17
ch 1,
abuseSad, so very very sad.
csicrazii
2005-07-11
ch 1,
abuseoh my god! that was awsome! you made me cry! wow! this was an awsome story!! you made me cry (not many ppl can do that)! i loved the way wrote this. I cant wait to read the second part to this story! Great job!
orangebronco
2005-06-30
ch 1,
abuseomg. this made me cry. its so sad, but so beautiful. the rythym is smooth and nice. really good job, oh , i just watch out for very minor spelling errors (cheats) lol.
krysalys
2005-06-13
ch 1,
abuseWonderful job. Very wrenching, and I'm looking forward to the next installment.
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Krys
Dizzy-Dreamer
2005-06-13
ch 1,
abuseOh... on some level I think I knew it was Sara because of what was said [hey - i'm not as stupid as i look!] but wow... the ending was a shocker. Really well written. :o)
lovesdigsdmanded
2005-05-17
ch 1,
abusewhat a story... what a beautiful sad story... i love it... another story that made me cry while reading it...
SoLostSoHelpless
2005-05-16
ch 1,
abuseWhoah you know what's freaky? Halfway through this story, the radio started playing "One Sweet Day" and I heard the lines "and I know your shining down on my from heaven" and it was so weird, cuz I read the line "your looking down on me from heaven" at the same time the song was about over! Weird, huh? Good job! You made me all choked up! Excellently done
oliphnt
2005-05-16
ch 1,
abuseThat was so sad.

You should continue to write but make sure you read your stories carefully to correct any typos and grammar errors. Sometimes the spellchecker doesn't pick up everything.

Good job!
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