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CrossoverQueen
2006-06-21 . chapter 1
Ha. Yet another piece of demented humor from Lavender Valentine. For a while I thought he was angsting over someone he loved, but then that ending... priceless.

That Amazon woman was an obvious Mary Sue, albeit an amusing one. Didn't Amazons cut off their right breast so they could draw a bow more easily?

Poor Sesshomaru. I would never wear him down so much that he'd turn to Viagra. Unlike all those OTHER selfish people... *mutters*
DocBevCulver
2005-12-11 . chapter 1
Bwahahahaha, oh po' Sesshy. He really does need a break!

I loved it! It was a great little piece and now I need to go find some pain killers for my po' **, because falling out of my chair from laughing at the end hurts! *eg*

Bravo!
ShindyNova
2005-08-16 . chapter 1
Hahaha omg... That made me laugh.
Eleventy Nine
2005-08-09 . chapter 1
This is everything fan fiction was meant to be... haha.
Lady Kagewaki
2005-06-18 . chapter 1
WOW! What a TWIST! That was GREAT! I really really liked what you did with this! AT first I thought...Hm. Interesting. Then it got a little too angsty for my taste...then BLAM! THat ending was terrific!
Qem
2005-05-29 . chapter 1
Aw Poor tired, overworked Sesshoumaru. Poor thing. Such a tragic overworked life he lives...

Calls: Oh Inuyasha...
J. Merritt
2005-05-22 . chapter 1
ROTFLMFAO - I cannot express how much I loved this!!
Mystic Hanyou
2005-05-18 . chapter 1
I just wanted to say, Poor Sesshoumaru. But I have to agree. He does get used for lemon stories alot. But who are we to complain. The youkai is HOT! I just wish I knew how many stripes he really has. Great one-shot.
Chibi Horsewoman
2005-05-16 . chapter 1
You are so screwed up! I think the military finally rotted your mind! Fluffy and viagra ROTFLMAO!

Okay, well I have a dare for you too. I just have to email it.
Deadly Tears
2005-05-16 . chapter 1
At first, I thought Sesshomaru was just having dreams about a person he's in-love with; then the mention with the pills had me thinking he was addicted to drugs. But then came the part at the end, which was really unexpected. It all came together and I was like: @_@;;

Anyway, I liked this one-shot. Quite funny, in fact. Good work! ^_^
dawnsama
2005-05-16 . chapter 1
This brilliant. I love how you exploit the fangirly nature of... fangirls.

Some of my favorite lines:

“Shut up, Man-**,” the woman replied.

If I find out that any of you are disturbing his rest, I’ll whip out my eraser!

“I would,” the Creator snarled. “I’ll axe him, just like I did with – ”

“No spoilers!” Kiria howled, clamping her hands over her ears. “La, la, I can’t hear you!”

The shift in tone... from Sesshoumaru's angst to the creator's fury. It's such a great syke out, a totally unexpected turn of events.

Awesome job! *puts on story favorites*
Ouatic-7
2005-05-16 . chapter 1
Poor Sess. At least he's getting a respite but what about Inuyasha?
someone
2005-05-16 . chapter 1
Your story is really weird
Dana Daidouji
2005-05-16 . chapter 1
This certainly was a good reading! The ending was completely unexpected.

It helped me with my own headache, even if it had different origins. *lol*
TitianWren
2005-05-16 . chapter 1
Wrong. So very wrong. *giggles insanely*

Hmm... What exactly does it say about the rest of the Canon characters that they were overly-willing participants/enablers of this torture? Poor Sesshomaru really is too pretty for his own good.

The Mary-Sue was a nice touch as well. I had to snigger at the "Princess of the Amazons" bit, since, according to Greek legend, Amazon women ritually destroyed their right breast and would therefore never have an "hourglass figure." Then again, that little detail never shows up in the shiny, oh-so-pretty world of fanfiction anyway... is it possible to have too much useless knowledge, I wonder?

Anyway, lovely job here. And I didn't spot any comma splices either. Then again, I wasn't looking for them. ;-)

-Tish
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