Fascinating. You have a gift for storytelling; a gist for taking it slow, for building tension while keeping everything moving. This is a lovely mystery, one that I would love to see brought to a conclusion, or even continued.

are u continuing this? it would be greatly appreciated. :)
cheers,
zoe

omg! that was excellent! It reminds me of "A Consorts Loyalty". Keep writing, I'm looking forward to reading it!

This is really good. Are you planning on posting more?

This is an interesting and different setup. It looks good.

Wow. So well written. I'm excited about this!! I can't wait to read more!!

You must continue! What happens next?

This was very intriguing...hope you update soon!

please continue I am very interested in this story and would like to read more of it.

the beginning seems promissing - i look forward to read more.

Hi!

Your story seems very interesting, I hope to read the next chapter soon.

Bye

DM

Quite an interesting beginning. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this.

Look forward to reading more...

That was a great chapter!! Please update soon! Can't wait to find out what happens next!!

could you like...y'know...update soon? Please?...please? *-*

It feels so professionally written! GAWD! T.T I wish I could write like that...do update soon! This sounds promising!

-Wp