I LOVE revenge fics, keep on updating this :)

Your writing matches Snicket's, but I do have one suggestion. Try lengthing the chapters a bit more.

i love it that was so good. But:

1. Snicket has 1 't'

2. it was too short i could have read it 4 ever great story anyway

SomeBizarreSheila

you sound exactly like Snicket. total cool. keep it coming.

awsome possibly,no definatley the best asou fan fic i ever read!

Update soon! This is such an incredibly evil awesome story and I'm loving it! I like the way that your style mimcks Lemony's, that makes it feel even closer to the Snicket world...if that made any sense. Yeah, update soon!

Spooky-ful. Nice Handler style by the way.