I really like the style this was written in. *can't think of more to say at ze moment* ja ne.

I...like it. Which is...weird. Good. Keep writing!

Toodles,

bobalina

Haha. that was funny! I love this pairing!

Signed,

HamHamIbm

Me: Ahahahahahaha nice. Asuma you sick pervert.

Temari:Dam straight! Asuma get someone your own age!

Me: Shut it Temari before I rip out you hair things!

Temari: NO NOT THAT! *hides behind gaara who is in a panda suite*

Sasuke: *doin ballerina spins and is in a pink tutu* Can I have a cookie?

Me: NO! *hits Sasuke* Stupid ballerina emo.

nice & short

Do You know me? cause it seems like you do.

i relate to this story in ways that you could not possibly understand.

*whistles* Wow. Love the voice/style. Flippant and deppresing. Awesome.

You did a good job with this pairing, at first I thought it might be Ino and Shikamaru or Sakura and Sasuke, but I'm glad that I was wrong. :)

Hn. I liked it though it was short. It's well-written. Nice.

Dude.

This is f* up.

whao..nice one shot! realli cute but kinda depressing too? anyways*...*clas*...

could have used a bit more build up.

hee hee hee i loved this and now i'm a growing fan of asuino. hee hee hee you should make a sequal in which you tell about the 'hell to pay.' please? -

I always tried imagining Asuma paired with someone ASIDE from Kurenai; particularly people from his own team. I like how you did this one. Sure, Ino is drunk and all, but I think it came out okay. I liked it. It was enjoyable, and I loved how you started the story/drabble like a joke. It was short and sweet, and the language you used captured the mood well. GOod job. D