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ShaolinQueen
2008-09-23
ch 1,
abuseGreat job, very intense. I love it!
MJ
2008-08-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis was just lovely. A really realistic and thoughtful take on Sanji. The way you put rape into his background without getting heavy handed and wrote Sanji and Zoro's comraderie without being too soft or too harsh... very well done. And I really enjoyed your take on why Sanji obsesses over women.

So much love for this fic. It's now one of my all time favorites in the One Piece fandom.

You seriously deserve more reviews for this.
ValorieJueles
2008-08-03
ch 1,
abuseThat is so nice! Sigh, poor Sanji though, still doesn't think he's worth a lady... :(
Muria
2008-06-15
ch 1,
abuseWhat a look into Sanji's mind... Very believable and very well-written... The mild foreshadowing made it all the more chilling.

I'm very glad Sanji's with Luffy's crew, now. Everything you wrote is perfectly plausible, and that's what's unnerving.

I noticed that your profile said you don't write fanfiction anymore... Good luck with whatever you're writing! You have a very nice writing style.
homeostatis
2007-06-27
ch 1,
abuseAw. Your introspective Sanji deserves a hug.

You, on the other hand, deserve a two-thumbs up. This fic gives some excellent insight into Sanji (the-Baratie-is-not-a-pirate-ship excuses be damned!)
Dana
2007-02-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseI'm sorry I have no comments that can help you improve this story, but that is only because I find the story absolutely perfect. The mood of the piece is wonderful and adds more to Sanji's character, improving it without sacrificing the original. This character piece is absolutely beautiful.
mellish
2006-07-12
ch 1,
abuseGreat insight into Sanji, and how the crew fits together like a particularly twisted puzzle. ^^ I like it plenty - the wording was very nicely done.
Berylia-Crystalia
2006-06-25
ch 1,
abuseI like the little things that are not told in this story like how Sanji is more fond of Zorro that he cares to admit it and how Nami will always be a lady to him.
Thanks for the story.
thermopylae
2006-04-06
ch 1,
abuseThis is lovely, and I love the way you handled Sanji's self-perceived relationships with his crewmates. I don't share your take on his thoughts toward Nami, but the scene itself was much better written than most. Anyways, this was really terrific.
imjuzakyd
2005-07-27
ch 1,
abusewonderful description of Sanji. i love it. *applause*

seriously, you have talent. the way you were able to come up with reasons as to why Sanji adores women, and why he always has this tension-clash-thing with Zoro, they were all well written.

good job. =)
Darkday Chaos
2005-06-18
ch 1, anon.
abuse... ((BZZT)) ...
Chaos here. I've seen this story on quite a few 'Favorite Stories' lists, but I never bothered to check it out until
now, and I'm glad I did. This is nice, deep insight into Sanji's chacter, and fits, well, perfectly. None of the
strawhats are my favorite chacters, because they all are, and I love the interaction between them. You added to the
relationships between Sanji and the others well, again, perfectly. Love it! ^.^ Chaos out.
... ((BZZT)) ...
blackfuzzdevil
2005-06-18
ch 1,
abusethat was a sweet read. it made me feel tingly. thanks for the great story.
madri
2005-06-06
ch 1,
abuseThis is WONDERFUL! If you wrote this when you were new to the fandom, I can't wait to see what you write when you're an old pro at it. Seriously. I can't get over how great this is. *gushes*
Alarwen
2005-06-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseGreat writing! I liked it a lot. Going deep into Sanji's thoughts and expressing all of his fears and joys, makes a good reading. Keep up the work. I'll be looking out for it with impatience.
Thank you!
Jadeprince
2005-06-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseI've never left a comment on I don't even have an account, but this short piece was so delightful and honest and in character that I couldn't help but say something. You have a lovely way with words and you explore Sanji's relationships with Nami and Zoro in a very realistic way. Your assumptions make sense and your observations of the canon fit well. Thank you! I would love for more people to read this; you might consider posting it on one of the One Piece fic communities. Even onepieceyaoi would welcome you.
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