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| epona9009 2005-05-18 ch 1, | abuseWow! You do a good job of getting in to Lianne's head. At the beginning though I wasn't quite sure who you where writing about or who she was talking to or about. Very deep. |
| Rathead 2005-05-17 ch 1, | abuseWell, that's just..neat. I love the dispassionate tone; she's used to masking excuses for herself. I also like the structure,it's like sorting through photographs. At any rate, I enjoyed this very much. |
| NoFx1018 2005-05-17 ch 1, | abuseI know I'm gonna sound like I just smoked pot when I say this...But man, that was like, deep. |
| a.k.a.-ashley 2005-05-17 ch 1, | abuseIt was great to see Lianne's perspective on this whole mess. Very interesting idea for a fic and I think you did a fantastic job with it. While it didn't make me sympathize with Lianne, it did make me think of her differently. |