 Blonde-Existentialist 2009-08-31 . chapter 5Makes ya feel empathetic and lonely for all of them. But wonderfully written. And you just want em to get it together and be happy. |
 FrustratedPhoenix2006 2007-06-26 . chapter 5I haven't read these drabbles in a long time and there just as beautiful the second time around. |
 Kamikakushi 2006-07-17 . chapter 5Wow. This was brilliantly written. Hard to find good drapples these days. Very good. Great use of syntax and diction, and this strange melancholy aura about the story was also very attractive. Well done, indeed. |
 poison fairy 2006-04-15 . chapter 5 cant wait till the next chapter! |
 the-everglow 2006-02-26 . chapter 5luvd chs 1-5, i hope to see more in the future. |
 Youkai no Yume 2006-02-26 . chapter 5Aw, I should thank you for being one of the first Champloo writers I've ever read ^^. These drabbles keep getting better everytime I read them. I remembered reading "Different" a couple of times over before, haha. Never stop writing. |
 Jou-chan 2006-02-13 . chapter 5 Great job! Very deep and thoughtful. I REALLY enjoyed reading the Mugen/Fuu ones! =D =D |
 FrustratedPhoenix2006 2006-01-14 . chapter 2Experience and past regrets have transformed Mugen into a wise fool. Unfortunately, thanks to Mugen's newly acquired wisdom, the song, "Only Fools Fall in Love" is now stampeding through my brain like a herd of elephants fighting for the last peanut. Also, it sounds silly but the description of Mugen treading upon grass as he tracks Fuu suits his character. Weird, huh? |
 kinokokichigai 2005-07-10 . chapter 5very nice...i love these drabbles of yours. i look forward to the next installment. |
 Darkness-ninja 2005-06-26 . chapter 5very interesting |
 One-Mean-Rabbit 2005-06-24 . chapter 5wow...I like it...a lot...can't wait to read more... |
 raggedywings 2005-06-21 . chapter 5very interesting, i can't wait for an update! |
 Silent Kunoichi aka. Fiona 2005-06-20 . chapter 5this is really good Pams |
 Elementary Magpie 2005-06-16 . chapter 5I like this last one the best. You nicely capture the distinction between infatuation and love that Jin could plausibly experience (and therefore make all of that JinFuu fanfiction believable). And I think that you are absolutely right about what attracted Jin to Shino: seeing himself in her. I've wondered if he recognized her intent to jump because he's thought those things himself in the past, at some similar bridge.
BTW, it took me forever to actually read these enjoyable and interesting drabbles because of the unpleasant and probably grammatically incorrect "they have seen" in the summary blurb. It gives the wrong impression about the quality of your prose and the perceptiveness of your ideas. Maybe consider updating the blurb? |
 MistressMizu 2005-06-14 . chapter 5I got it :3 I like your stories, even though it's mostly one-shots... And they're kind of sad, but I like it ^_^ It's kind of the truth, instead of always the happy ending you get. |