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| -XxTWILIGHTfreakxX- 2008-07-31 ch 16, | abuseWOW |
| Rose Red Misery 2008-05-14 ch 16, | abuseyou definately need to review again! i'm getting anxious wanting to find out what happens next! |
| catsrule 2008-04-02 ch 16, | abuseWHEN ARE YOU GOING TO WRITE MORE!! |
| TrisakAminawn 2008-03-15 ch 16, | abuseHallo, this took me a while. Not BAD, silver, I was so tense. Go Mulch's conscience! The 'develop a normal psyche thing' maybe didn't go over that well...but oh, well. Don't forget, people, that he's also been turned into a sprite and is likely to be getting stupider. The thing with trusting his intelligence on Mona and the window was brilliant. Really liked the line 'evincing varying mixtures of hostility, resolve, and bed head.' You're getting better with words all the time! Team...what was it? 'Team Excellent Amazing Fantastic Ultra World Saveriffic Norris Smackdown Comrades Hyperforce New With Extra Mulch' (not the amazing Memory on Legs, I went back and looked) did a pretty good job here. So, why did Clara end the test that early? Couldn't they have made the elevators break down, and so on? You'd think if they're so dishonest they'd make the intrepid heroes go through all they could. Wear them out, you know? Although I guess unless they cut the cables that wouldn't be 'falling' anymore. Hey, wait, I'm suddenly confused by somethign from last chapter. Why does Clara call Artemis Armani? Didn't he shrink? So can't he not wear his suits anymore? Maybe he didn't shrink. Maybe his suit shrunk. Maybe the Fomorri gave him a new suit. Maybe I'm just losing track of details over the months. 207 reviews...not bad. Trisak out. |
| KuroAi15 2008-01-13 ch 16, | abuse...wow. what a well thought out story. cheers! X3 |
| Alpha-Beta 2008-01-12 ch 16, anon. | abuseyay! update! this is probably the first review i've written where i haven't been totally hyper. i'm probably to tired to be hyper. we spent five days of almost continous traveling in the car to get to queensland. we even had to sleep in the car. (don't do it, it's so uncomfortable!) still have enough energy to be mega-happy at the update though! i was reading over my previous reviews and i realised that i'd forgotten to comment on your use of the insey-winsey spider rhyme, which was absolutely amazingly inventive. i worship you! it's my bedtime now, so toodles! A.B. |
| artyfangirl316 2008-01-09 ch 16, | abusewow. this story is utterly...wow. you have taken the characters into such situations that are extremely wonderful!! =) this story is my favorite on so far, not that the others on my favorites list are not. this is just my favorite!! i mean, how can you not like this story?! its so good! silverfingers, i really really really hope you update extremely soon, because i am dying to know who the formorrians are. and what's happening to them, and why they're all transformed. and the whole foaly saving mona and all was absolutely satisfying! not to mention well-written to the max. excellent! =) |
| me-obviously 2008-01-01 ch 16, | abuseThese last few chapters are so crazy! I love it. For all their lame rhyming and silly behavior, the Formorians are hardly something to scoff at. And I just love your characterizations. Out of all of them, the fear aspect of the task is wearing on Arty the most, just not in the normal way (but Arty's never been normal anyways) and I adore it all. Brilliant work. |
| Troublerocks 2007-12-30 ch 16, | abuseWow! This is so good! Please update!? :) |
| BoxofChocolates 2007-12-28 ch 15, | abuseT.E.A.F.U.W.S.N.S.C.H.N.W.E.M. hm... somethings shouldn't be abbreviated or created. |
| BoxofChocolates 2007-12-28 ch 7, | abuseHolly is only in her eighties. |
| BoxofChocolates 2007-12-28 ch 4, | abuseI know how you know. It's in the books.=) |
| Silvermoon Dragoneye 2007-12-28 ch 16, | abuse*Lowers to ground and flicks tail* Like it! Now, get a head start and run, or in your case, type, 'cause an angry Queen of the ElementalDragons and SifterDragons is going to be on your tial if you don't update! |
| klutz 2007-09-05 ch 2, anon. | abuseok... first, don't make so many death threats in one post, it's not classy it's desparate. you have a good thing going here. If people like myself want to review, we will do so, if not, then don't hold it against them. as a reader, it gets extremely annoying when authors beg and plead and virtually get on their hands and knees for someone to tell them that their story is good. if you think that there is a slight chance that the story might be crap then don't post it! as for the story, i will comment every chapter and it will be critical |
| Troublerocks 2007-08-15 ch 14, | abuseOh please update, I really like this fic! |