Great story. Pretty fluffy and all that, except for Angie leaving, George dying and so. I'm just glad there wasn't any complicated love triangle like u so often do. It's nice to have some simplicity in their relationships. Great writing! Please update Real Love soon.

Loved this fic!
very cute,flufy and a bit sad!

Hello
I like your fic and I would like publish it in french...
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I HATE IT! u made me cry... y? Y DID U HAVE TO MAKE ME CRY! ok ok... i m overeacting... i LOVED IT!! and evilevergreen i think the letters were from alicia to fred about her being depressed thingy thing... isn't it? that's wat i thought... i mean read the line "But finding letters written by another woman to your husband?" it's very unique... but george y must he DIE?!?!?

It was pretty good, but the rating is definitely off. It's nowhere near 'R' or 'M' material.

Ah, this was a look on Fred and Angelina that we don't normally see! I liked the plot, the thought of Fred committing adultery is very orginal. Although I was a bit disappointed with the end - but thats just myself, I thought he was going to get busted ^_~ - I really liked the feel of this. The beginning was perfect though, very well written. Well done!

Interesting. I liked the idea, but I think you got through it a bit too quickly! Well done, and the ending is sweet, if not a little abrupt. Bravo!

Eh, it was okay. . . I'm playing, it was good, but it ended a little too abruptly for my taste. I mean if I were Angelina, I would need a little more convincing. Because if the letters were Alicia's to George, why the hell would Fred have them? I just don't get it. I'm sorry, but that one would have to be explained to me.

But let me tell you, the moment I read, *“What are these, Fred?” Angelina asked tearfully.* I thought, 'Uh-oh. Fred is in trouble.' But I didn't think they would be love letters. I was thinking maybe whoever he was having an affair with had left something for Angelina to find on purpose. But that's just like me. . . to think the worst of Fred. *Smacks her own hand* 'Bad Evil E., bad!'

Anyway, I think you should do a companion piece, maybe from Alicia point-of-view about the letters and what they say. I mean Angelina must of read them right? What would make her think they were to Fred?

it was sad and happy at the same time - a good mixture of both. i was seriously surprised to hear about george dying (*bawls*) i guess that's why fred was drunnk at the beginning??

over all i'd give it an A ;) (it's the last few days of school - the grades are going to my head ;)) it was great for a one-shot.

good job.

~angelface04~