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| Alice-CullenRox00 2008-06-25 ch 1,  | abuseI love it! you fit the characters personality well! I only have the 1st 2 seasons of third Rock! i want the rest though. |
| Grand Puba of All The Smurf... 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseRight on. |
| theRegalBeagle 2007-04-22 ch 1, | abuselol that was so funny! good job! |
| CloseTalker 2007-02-15 ch 1, | abuseThat was pretty funny. I can also relate, because my mom messed up my hair when I was young. It was all uneven. That was when she said "Forget that, you're getting your hair cut at the barber!" |
| Flippy8490 2006-11-29 ch 1, | abusehaha great story! You did a great job mimicking the personalities of the characters in the show. Especially you did a great job with Sally. Write more! -Flippy8490 |
| cassiopoeia 2006-10-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a good story about third rock, in that it captures some of that off-the-cuff humour that is third rock, espectially the fruit loops being more open minded. It is a hard show to write about, because it's a very visual comedy, so writing is hard to capture the physicallity and energy of it, this writer has done very well, make the story longer . . add more about the other characters a story for everyone all grouped into one. : ) |
| Nobody (no, really!) 2006-10-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseActually, Tommy did get a haircut in the episode "Just Your Average Dick" where the aliens were trying to be more "normal." However, his haircut wasn't touched on very much in the episode even though he kept his hair short for the rest of the show's run. In any case, this is very well-written and all the character feel very in-character. The only thing I could really complain about is some of the grammer. |
| HellHouse 2006-09-03 ch 1, | abuseHi I am new to Fanfic Loved your story, is there anymore? Love Hellhouse |
| Notepad 2006-05-06 ch 1, | abuseAww...that's cute. Just a few miniscule spelling/grammar/punctuation bits, but otherwise good. Your descriptive, non-dialogue bits are a little frosty at times, and Dick's line about not letting her near his head w/ anything sharp could be a line for Sally, but everything else is humorous. |
| harrypottermagic32 2006-04-17 ch 1, | abuseHaha, cute story. It was pretty good, everyone was pretty in character and everything. |
| weez2610 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abusetommy was hot with long hair...i bet he would be hot with a mohawk too |
| Cadao 2006-03-01 ch 1, | abuselol |
| Z Star The Hidden Dragon 2005-12-28 ch 1, | abuseO AHAHAHAHAHAHA! ^o^ OMG! Poor Tommy. This is my frist 3rd rock from the Sun fic and I LOVED it! Too bad the TV show had to end though... The guys are so mean to Tommy, but what family isn't mean to you sometimes? |
| Kirakiwibug 2005-11-24 ch 1, | abuseThe lines are definitely true the the characters...I can see this one as an episode! Nice job! |
| Barricade.Boys 2005-11-23 ch 1, | abuseA very good story idea. It would make a great sub-plot for an episode. Why on 3rd Rock don't they make an episode of it? Maybe they have already--I've only seen two seasons. But I think two things could be improved--work on making the dialogue a little more life-like, and try elaborating on each action a little more to make it flow. Don't get me wrong--the story is just great! I think I'll go eat some Froot Loops now. |