|Reviews for What She Can't Say|
| whitem 4/14/07 . chapter 28
Why do I feel it wasn't Bonnie who hit Carla on the head? This is a nice build up to the main event. I cringe at what's about to happen, because many a thing in a garage can be used as a weapon.
What's about to happen is going to be a teaser for a later chapter, isn't it? Oh... and Barkin's timing could not have been worse.
Until the next... Laters.
| AtomicFire 4/14/07 . chapter 28
I can see a lot of pieces are headed for a topping out at this garage. Bonnie seems determined to slay her demons and go out with her head held high. Nice use of the character and her pain to drive her to this action, but is it the right one? Kim and Ron want one result, Tara wants another result and then there are Bonnie's needs. It will be interesting to see who wins out.
Nice bit with the PNMR on Betty's shoulder, she should have her own on the other shoulder. lol
Thanks for the great read!
| Star-Eva01 4/10/07 . chapter 27
You keep adding great chapter after great chapter to this story.
You have again added another wonderfull addition this time.
Looking forward to the next.
| jmcconnor 4/7/07 . chapter 13
Just found this story, and read to chapter 13.
Gotta say, it's the first time I ever had to take a break from reading a story because it was so dang emotionally taxing! I mean, I literally had to go out for a run to clear my head before continuing.
Mad props to you for this wonderful story.
| Joe Stoppinghem 4/7/07 . chapter 27
I see the tension is starting up again with the story.
I am amazed on what you have accomplished with at story you felt was finished when Kim was finally able to tell Ron she loved him.
So much to mention but let's just say I am getting excited over where this thing is headed. Never have liked the thought of the "Black Helicopters" government agency concepts but this is going very well.
Thanks again for all your effort with this story.
| Fabius Maximus 4/7/07 . chapter 27
Well. Someone manufactured an emergency to justify thier existence, and now the emergency has grown up and is ravening back. How that turns out is going to be very interesting.
Bonnie is free- not free of danger or of fear but finally, due to Sensei's (and Ron's) Mercy and Charity, to make her own decisions finally. To accept guilt and make amends as best she can, no matter the cost. In one respect, whatever happens, she's already won- turning down the "get out of jail free" card that was offered her, along with the "privilage" of being a badass, of being able to always show others how tough she was, instead picking the far harder path to genuine redemption, starting with "this was my fault". Now it remains to be seen if she can survive.
| Ultimate Naco Topping 4/7/07 . chapter 27
Hooray! I've finally caught up with this story!
This has, so far, been a fantastic piece of drama. And though you have put our beloved teen heroes through Hell, you still showed that the little things that made them who they are are the things that brought them back.
I am eagerly awaiting the climax!
| CajunBear73 4/7/07 . chapter 27
A-freakin'-mazing chapter Sir Duck! Tremendous confrontation with Mrs Dr P and the agents black! Some payback WILL BE due for that agency concocting this little passion play in order to justify their existence above all others, and then to swoop down and rescue the world at the last minute. You go Mrs Dr P!
Now Bonnie's on the run, Kim and the rest of the team are looking for Bonnie & Carla, things are heating up elsewhere, and Ron's friends are hovering just out of sight. Haven't heard from the bad guy lately; soon I suppose?
Kind of wondering how Ron will explain Yamanuchi to Kim after all the time that has gone by, especially with all the coming clean with each other that has taken place so far...
| spectre666 4/7/07 . chapter 27
"Power corrupts, absolute power corrupts absolutely". It's all coming down, and maybe Kim and Ron can take down a few 'extra-constitutional' grooups while they're at it. God job, and eagerly awaiting your next.
| AtomicFire 4/7/07 . chapter 27
Ok, review out of sequence but you get the drift.
I've narrowed the guest down to two possibilities both of them very capable and both possibly the one Kim wants to also speak to about herself and Ron as well.
This is a war being fought on all levels seemingly caused by a deliberate error on someones part. Sounds like a normal war to me.
Things are slipping back into Kim's 'normal' patterns, but how about Ron? He has made the big step up in all things (I can see them trying to take Ron and the blade... I see people in black with no heads! lol) so how is he coping with the return to school? He is Kim's moral compass but yet he is withholding a large chunk of info about himself and the nature of his powers from Kim at the askance of others, honor or not that must be taxing to him.
Thanks for the great read!
| whitem 4/7/07 . chapter 27
I really really like this Hard Ass Anne. To make a Black Ops agent basically run for cover just from her words is... awesome!
If Kim ever does talk with Tara, the poor girl would sing in a micro-second!
Oh... Wade is back! Yes! He may be limited for now, but I have a feeling not for long.
As for Carla? I almost pity the poor girl when she's found. Almost. It definitely won't be pretty...
Another awesome chapter! What you do with words and conversation is truly amazing!
Until the next chap... Laters!
| Joe Stoppinghem 4/2/07 . chapter 26
Yes, I like what you are doing with this story.
As I have mentioned before, this is on another level of the fan-fiction site. In this chapter alone, Bonnie and Tara, Kim and Ron, and even Drakken has been addressed.
If K/R have to take a breather, it is so deserved of them.
I am getting ancy to find out who the "promised elder" is.
I would like to guess, but if I am right, (yea like that is going to happen) it could ruin you writing. I definitely don't want to do that.
Thanks again for the time and great effort you are putting into this story.
| creativetoo 4/1/07 . chapter 26
Excellent chapter. Not much more to say than that.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
| spectre666 4/1/07 . chapter 26
Outstanding. Very deft manner of lightening the tension. "take away his unlimited soda supply" indeed. LOL, thisis one of my favorites, and well wortht the wait. Again, well done.
| Maygen Lauren 4/1/07 . chapter 3
Great chapter. :)
but just to inform you, wet suits don't keep clothing underneath dry. (despite the fact that they were sweating) dry suits do. wet suits keep you warm in cool water.