Reviews for Forgotten Embers

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KUMidshipman2011 2008-09-08 ch 5,	abusehey, this is like the best AishaJim fic i have ever read. so well thoughtout, the details are just phenomenal and the plot is simply amazing. lots of cute moments ^.^ i found my self smiling with almost every sentence. I am a die hard OLS fan and i must say, this fic stays true to the series. outstanding job and I really do hope you update soon. I cant wait... :P ~cody
breakaway-republic 2008-07-25 ch 5,	abusePoor Suzuka- she's too hot to be an old, lonely spinster! Nicely done chapter here- I'm looking forward to more...
Charlton Lemminhurst 2008-06-06 ch 2, anon.	abuseThis is awesome but I just wanted to bring up a small mistake you made being the OS freak that I am. After they reached the Leyline the first time, the part of Melfina that was the Maiden of the Layline went away and incidentally, her navigational capabilities for the Outlaw Star. So when everyone was coming to save the day, Melfina should have just been sitting somewhere on the bridge, not in her tank.
Arron AKA 'OUSHI' 2008-05-22 ch 5, anon.	abuseI love the story so far it was fantasctic so i'm willing to w8 for the last chapter. I have been a fan of Outlaw Star for a long time I remember when it first came out on Cartoon network it was awesome so keep up the good work and keep writing what you write and don't give up. P.S. I'm working on a story About The Legend Of Zelda Twilight Princess and I'm on Fanfiction as well so look me up and write me back the name is at the top (oushi) if not then It's rexard. So Peace I'm Out
Melesilio 2008-05-11 ch 5, anon.	abuseto be honest, I dont want this story to end yet lol. Im rather enjoying reading your work XD, and i think if you use enough creativeness you could probubly have yourself a rather long story here, not just an AishaXjim like you originally sought out to do. Though i am curious as to find out how it will all end ^_^. cant wait for the next chapter!
Saffron 2008-05-11 ch 5, anon.	abusejaw drops through the floor ...I never would have thought, but...I suppose anything (at this point) can happen. Now, I can't help but wonder just what IS going to happen to Suzuka and Leylong! Thanks for Jim and Aisha, Gene and Mel and slight Suzuka and Leylong smutX3 Whatever Gene has planned we can only hope that'll work;) Good luck writing the next chapter! Ciao for Now(^_~)
darkness shade sonata 2008-05-10 ch 5,	abusedude this is an awesome fanfic, please don't make the next chapter the last chapter, it is the best outlaw star fanfic yet
Anonymous Void 2008-04-30 ch 5,	abuseAt the rate this is going, I wouldn't be surprised to find them having an encounter with the Tendo King. I hadn't expected to see Leylong again. Still, it seems you kept him in character. I am eagerly anticipating the ending though, I think you could write two more chapters at the most.
JonnyStarwind 2008-04-22 ch 5,	abuseAwesome chapter once again! Can't wait to read the next!!
angelbattler 2008-04-09 ch 5,	abuseGreat chapter, man, especially on tenrei. and i forgot about Leylong. End the story off with a bang.
Shinzochi 2008-04-08 ch 5,	abuseThat was MAGNIFICENT! ! I was LAUGHING MY ** OFF through out the chapter, ans i must say that you have GREAT mind for erotic scenes, and places for GREAT possible cliffhangers, i was on the edge of my seat in many places. I really hope you take this story beyond just 6 chapters, cause i really thing that this story is TOO AWESOME to end at 6 chapters, and i REALLY REALLY REALLY think that your story should be made into a sequel to the first Outlaw Star.
CrimsonH 2008-04-07 ch 5,	abusePretty good. Over all, it was an excellent chance for a little character development I suppose. Though, you’re spelling near the end(around page 15 if printed) went down hill
Onhiro 2008-04-07 ch 5,	abuseI must say that it has been quite the long time since I've last seen your work. It's rather disheartening to know that soon this story will end. I would've thought that this story would last longer. KEEP ON WRITING!
NamelessHeretic 2008-04-07 ch 5,	abuseYes, all praise the power of drunken lurv! :D
Bassclone13 2008-04-07 ch 5,	abuseAwesome, you finally got the chapter in! And it's really good, I was surprised by Leylong, I didn't think he'd be in this story. He was one of my favorite characters in Outlaw Star too, haha. And I've tried the tootsie pop thing, I got to around 150 something and said "!@#$ it" and bit the crap out of it.

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