MORE! MORE! MORE!

Sweet! Great dioluge and fighting scene. To be perfectly honest I can' write action worth crap, so it's a big dl to me.

Not bad. I have to admit, in this fandon there ias a severe derth of good writers and you happen to be helping to fill that void. Continue writing like this please- it was a rather well developed bit and you actually wrote all their voices very well and in character.

PLS

Very good! I like it a lot. Please Continue

Story was good, but you might want to change the title O.O Remix17 has already selected it for one of her stories. Thank you .-

AWesome story! I liked the action scenes and I thought it was very descriptive. The characters stayed in character and the sounded like the should. I just want to tell you something quickly-you might want to consider changing your title. Someone already ahs that title and she'll be none-too-happy to find out someone else has it. But good story

-Standing ovation

-Alexnandru Van Gordon