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| japanese-jew 2005-06-22 ch 1, | abuse. . . are you a native english speaker? No offense, but just by reading the first paragraph, there are a great number of spelling errors. |
| riegert8 2005-05-18 ch 1, | abuseI like this short story. I think you did very good story. I look forward reading any story you come up with. Till the next time. |
| rockergurl13 2005-05-18 ch 1, | abusethis is really sweet! i like, who did the blanket? well, i hope to see more of your work! |
| Final Fight 2005-05-17 ch 1, | abuseI think it's really good! |