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| DeviantSupaSoldier 2008-04-13 ch 1,  | abuseWow if only they knew. |
| redquicksilver 2008-02-14 ch 1, | abuseAW! That's so cute!! *does gooey face that makes you gag* Ok, sorry about that. But good job! Very cute! Ok, since you have asked that fellow writers help in your quest for perfection, I have one bit of information for you. Watch your tense use. I'm a funny person and I notice stupid things like tense use, as in past, present and future. Your story is really great though! Here's cookies for your trouble and my audacity. *hands over red, heart-shaped cookies* Yes, I know. They're gross. Happy Valentine's Day! |
| CobaltHeart 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseVery cute ending. |
| Cloud Envy Shikamaru 2007-11-09 ch 1, | abusei thought it was a great story! When Sasuke got hit i was like "OH **!" O.O my mom asked what happened and i said a "dude got hit by a drunk driver...u should read it!" and she really did, she says that the story was awsome and you should continue writing because you're very descriptive with details! ~Cloud Envy Shikamaru~ |
| Miharu 2007-11-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseAW! That is SO cute! |
| HopeoftheForgotten 2007-10-10 ch 1, | abuseNO! HE NEEDS TO TELL HER HOW HE FEELS! *weeps* |
| NikkiTheHyugaChick 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseAw, kawai! I remember reading this story a while ago and falling in love with it. You write very good SasuHina's. |
| LianFex 2007-09-28 ch 1, | abuse... ... ... ZOMG! Okay, now, I NEVER EVER say ZOMG in my reviews, ain't I? Well, of course, I don't! This is my first timer so you should be honored, haha! Just kidding! But really, me and my seatmate are so addicted to Naruto fanfictions that we would always talk about it every day...well, not almost everyday but close to it. Anyway, she mentioned this fic of yours and guess what? She squealed as she talked about THIS. Well, not really 'as' but between phrases. Uhh...just ignore it. Anyway, she mentioned that IT is SO CUTE that I would try reading it. But she didn't give me a link, dammit! Inhale...exhale...inhale...oh yeah. So here I am, after 2 long months, and finally...oh yes, finally...I SAW YOUR SUMMARY! And then, here is your review you deserved 2 months ago. *sigh* You don't know how much I love this. You made me squeal. You made my day. You're a great author. And I commend you for that. so I'll check your other stuff too, don't worry. Chocolat is VERY VERY awesome too! And finally, *sigh*, you made it pass my favorite authors list! Haha, I know, very lame...but at least be honored! Very passed it! Heheheh! And this is probably my longest review ever! Heheh... So I'll meet you next time! Later! ^-^ ~Lian |
| yourtypicalpsycho 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseaaw!sweetness! |
| Haruka2007 2007-09-07 ch 1, | abusethat is such a sad but cute story! U shud rewrite it and make it into like a longer story :D it wud be great :D. |
| Kawaii Kabu 2007-08-27 ch 1, | abuseaww that is so cute! its almost too fairytale-ish but it wasnt because it was so adorable and cute and sweet and other stuff, i compliment you! |
| Anonymous 2007-08-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseCUTE. |
| InvisibleAciren 2007-08-25 ch 1, | abuseCUTE! |
| Bitter-Blood-Sacrifice 2007-07-30 ch 1, | abuseReally good I loved it.. Bitter-Blood |
| Blue Society 2007-04-27 ch 1, | abuseI LUV ANY SASU/HINA FANFIC AND F.Y.I. THIS FANFIC WAS GOOD! TWO THUMBS UP! FIVE OUTTA FIVE STARS! SUPERB! YEAH! |