 math music reading 2009-07-23 . chapter 1That was really good, I really felt for Sasuke. I wish we had gotten to read the contents of the letters though. |
 BlackMoonTiger 2009-06-29 . chapter 1How sweet! i super loved this! awesome job! |
 just-a-noob 2008-12-31 . chapter 1I would never have thought of traffic lights as an assist in romance. How do you do it?! You're plot devices are amazing, and I am humbled by your stories. Just thought I'd let ya know.
Coolie-o,
just-a-noob |
 June-Avatar11 2008-09-20 . chapter 1sorry, but u will not get any critisism from me. this was awsome!! nothing wrong with it! though i dont know about spelling and grammar. to me everything was fine and written perfectly. but i dont know about any1 else.
anyways, so does hinata read all the love letters? does she know that he wrote them to her?
i cant beleive the story ended there! though u know i think it was better that u ended it here.things easily turn from a good story to a bad story when they continue a story out of force, or when it was meant to be a 1 shot. cuz usually the whole story gets messed up and boring.
anyways, i loved it! and its pretty good for being ur first fic. |
 Yoko-Pyon 2008-09-16 . chapter 1wah that is so kawaii ^_^ |
 deepxwriterxaboutxeverything 2008-08-30 . chapter 1haha I guess getting hit by a car has it's upsides |
 DeviantSupaSoldier 2008-04-13 . chapter 1Wow if only they knew. |
 redquicksilver 2008-02-14 . chapter 1AW! That's so cute!! *does gooey face that makes you gag* Ok, sorry about that. But good job! Very cute! Ok, since you have asked that fellow writers help in your quest for perfection, I have one bit of information for you. Watch your tense use. I'm a funny person and I notice stupid things like tense use, as in past, present and future. Your story is really great though! Here's cookies for your trouble and my audacity. *hands over red, heart-shaped cookies* Yes, I know. They're gross. Happy Valentine's Day! |
 CobaltHeart 2008-01-03 . chapter 1Very cute ending. |
 Cloud Envy Shikamaru 2007-11-09 . chapter 1i thought it was a great story!
When Sasuke got hit i was like "OH **!" O.O
my mom asked what happened and i said a "dude got hit by a drunk driver...u should read it!" and she really did, she says that the story was awsome and you should continue writing because you're very descriptive with details!
~Cloud Envy Shikamaru~ |
 Miharu 2007-11-04 . chapter 1 AW! That is SO cute! |
 HopeoftheForgotten 2007-10-10 . chapter 1NO! HE NEEDS TO TELL HER HOW HE FEELS! *weeps* |
 N-AngelFire 2007-10-06 . chapter 1Aw, kawai! I remember reading this story a while ago and falling in love with it. You write very good SasuHina's. |
 LianFex 2007-09-28 . chapter 1...
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ZOMG!
Okay, now, I NEVER EVER say ZOMG in my reviews, ain't I? Well, of course, I don't! This is my first timer so you should be honored, haha! Just kidding! But really, me and my seatmate are so addicted to Naruto fanfictions that we would always talk about it every day...well, not almost everyday but close to it. Anyway, she mentioned this fic of yours and guess what? She squealed as she talked about THIS. Well, not really 'as' but between phrases. Uhh...just ignore it. Anyway, she mentioned that IT is SO CUTE that I would try reading it.
But she didn't give me a link, dammit!
Inhale...exhale...inhale...oh yeah. So here I am, after 2 long months, and finally...oh yes, finally...I SAW YOUR SUMMARY! And then, here is your review you deserved 2 months ago.
*sigh*
You don't know how much I love this. You made me squeal. You made my day. You're a great author. And I commend you for that. so I'll check your other stuff too, don't worry. Chocolat is VERY VERY awesome too!
And finally, *sigh*, you made it pass my favorite authors list! Haha, I know, very lame...but at least be honored! Very passed it! Heheheh! And this is probably my longest review ever!
Heheh...
So I'll meet you next time! Later! ^-^
~Lian |
 yourtypicalpsycho 2007-09-21 . chapter 1aaw!sweetness! |