Very Funny. :-)

That was a great story! I really liked it! You are one creative writer, as I've said before. I love your new and very original ideas. I can't wait to read more of your stories!

Great job! I loved Shyster. Lol

I'm impressed. I wondered why so many of your stories had so few chapters, but now I see why. You write your stories like they are episodes on TV. It's very interesing. I didn't know how good you were until I read the last part of you becomming published.

As always, your writing is incredible. I'm beginning to wish you wrote for Charmed. Bureacracy demons would be a great addition.

As for being newly published: Way to go and congratulations! I'll certainly be reading your book.

oh...poor piper...update soon...lots of legal jargon, but it makes it authentic.

You're killing me here with your demon leagal's here missy. I think I'm right up there with Piper's feelings. Its a wonder shehasn't gone ballistic on the system.

Great story! Update soon!

Hang in there Piper. Schyster better do something to get Wyatt back or there will be some serious vanquishing happening.

I'm so sad for Piper. I don't want her to lose her child. Schyster you better do something to get her kid back!

Cool, I like the suspense. I'm Looking forward to the next Chapters.

That was the worst thing ive ever read. How could you want something like that to happen to Piper. Your just jealous of her thats all.

OMG! That was a great chapter! Schyster, do something! Wyatt CANNOT be taken away! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!

I really like this story so far.

Brilliant! This is a very unique story, and I can tell that you thought this story out. First, your disclaimer is very professional and unlike many other one's I've seen which try to be funny. Second, your writing style states that you have many skills in this area.