 parryotterdork 6/29/06 . chapter 1"'What do you mean? There is NO replacement slipper!' He said.
'No, no...but I have the other one!' She said everybody gasped.
'The other slipper?' Said Sir Ron.
'Yes!' And she pulled it out from her pocket. Sir Ron grabbed it and carefully put it on her foot. It fit."
What is wrong with this picture? You know, besides the fact that they're going to believe that a slipper she yanked out of her pocket is the matching glass slipper and-Oops, that was it. I'm just saying that it doesn't make sense if you think about it. Doesn't she have to prove that it's the other slipper? I mean, for all they know, she could've gone to the glass slipper store and bought another slipper in the same style in her size. It wouldn't have to be the matching slipper at all.
Well, anyway, aside from that, grammer and spelling were atrocious, but only a select few honestly seem to give a damn anymore, as I've seen. |
 candyapple111 6/7/06 . chapter 1wow... cinderhermione, huh? very good story! it is a good break from some really typical stories i read sometimes. hermione would be proud! |
 katekarson 8/29/05 . chapter 1Brilliant! It made me laugh loads of times, however, it's Bibbity Bobbity Boo :) I'm too sad to forget this.
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 Elion 9/7/04 . chapter 1i truly loved that. |
 can'ttellyou 6/29/04 . chapter 1 great story |
 Fomhoire 7/24/03 . chapter 1Love the idea of McGonagall as a fairy- godmother. HAHAHA! and even though I'm more of a Ron/Hermione fan I didn't mind the Harry/Hermione parring(?). |
 houdinishideaway 2/3/03 . chapter 1This was a really good story...I liked it alot. Cinderhermione. That name cracks me up. Will you please read my fic and let me know what you think? |
 WoodsKeeper 7/21/02 . chapter 1That was sweet! Please write others!
*Fighty-chan*
*Starchime ;3 |
 Hermione M. Moon 3/30/01 . chapter 1 That was very creative! I liked it a whole lot...and I love your smilie faces!
n_n! |
 METMA Mandy Signed Review 3/29/01 . chapter 1 Very nice! :) Bleh, H/H is pooooo! |