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Reviews for: Unfinished Business - Page 1 of 4
Swirly
2008-11-29 . chapter 1
Lovely and touching... except for this bit that made my jaw drop:

"So did I." XDD
bobalina
2008-01-27 . chapter 1
I'm afraid to ask about the particulars of Jin's and Mugen's...interaction. Eh. *cough*
JxFxM
2008-01-19 . chapter 1
AW...TRUE LOVE! =D
Shari Joy Rose
2007-09-26 . chapter 1
"Good. That's over with." Haha.. You actually managed to make that funny and in character instead of just vulgar like most people, so good job on that. Jin and Fuu were a little bit off, but it wasn't unbearable. Good stuff.
amwong88
2007-08-24 . chapter 1
hm...interesting story. i've never read anything about this anime that was so in-your-face and blank before - which is a good thing because it seemed more realistic in a way.
Elva
2007-08-23 . chapter 1
LOL!! So did I!! That's so hilarious. Who wouldn't right?
Chanyasoy
2007-06-26 . chapter 1
ROTFL! That was so f-ing funny!
Jin: "i know...so did I." That was PERFECT!
*sigh* FUU, geez, don't you know? We've ALL slept with Mugen! For him it is simply his way of greeting 'hello, dear old friend!'
HAHAHAHAHA!
Thank your for that ~.^
banada peel
2007-03-10 . chapter 1
A nice pairing I don't get to read as often as I'd like, and you've made them so cute together! I'm not sure how I feel about Fuu's moodswings- while they are in character it has been 3 years- and at times the writing seemed a little rushed, but then you have Jin and he's so polite and still doesn't really get women and you KNOW he SO did sleep with Mugen.
AKA Hummer
2006-07-10 . chapter 1
I was debating whether or not I should review. I felt so hopeless lazy as I read the stories. But then I felt so hopelessly guilty that I clicked the backbutton and clicked one of your one-shots. Cus dude. They're awesome. Short, sweet, to the point. Love it to pieces. Especially this one, I think. I giggled a little when Jin said that he slept with Mugen too. Heh. Still amuses me... Anyway.. great job on the fics!
Renleek
2006-03-25 . chapter 1
Gah!.. I am s-p-e-e-c-h-l-e-s-s... Oh how I wish every single word of this wonderful fic would come true EXACTLY the way you thought it!...*sigh*.. thank you!
Brittany Bright
2006-01-23 . chapter 1
That was possibly one of the best JinxFuu one-shots ever! I have the fuzzies. It was so cute and romantic and everyone was in character and it was perfect! There was Fuu and Mugen's little "moment" (I never really considered that possibility, but now that I think about it, it makes total sense. *facepalm* What else is Mugen good for? Don't get me wrong, I do love Mugen, but seriously... Fuu had the right idea there). Then there's Jin (*squee*) and his total misunderstanding of women. And his last comment... *bwahaha* Classic. Great job! This is a paragon of JinxFuu fics. I bow from afar.
FrustratedPhoenix2006
2006-01-15 . chapter 1
A nice character study of Jin and Mugen through Fuu's liasons with the two. I particularly enjoyed Jin's dry comment to cheer Fuu.
ForeverWildAtHeart
2005-11-20 . chapter 1
Thankyou SO much for that! I LUV YOU! *sniff* *sniff* About time I saw some real Jin and Fuu fluff!! I see way too much JinxMugen and MugenxFuu stuff. Anyway, I just HAD to review out of complete relief... Arigato!
the Black Rose
2005-09-12 . chapter 1
Very nice work. Very nice indeed. And very fitting for both characters, I think. Thanks so much! Love, Rose
Mariphasa Hecatene
2005-09-10 . chapter 1
The ending of this is simply terrific, especially Jin's confession about Mugen. =) Great Jin and Fuu character writing throughout, as well. I absolutely love the spare and graceful way you handle dialogue.

But I confess: I'm really posting a review because of this: "This story is dedicated to the samurai goddess who has created the gorgeous Amalgam web site, a wonderful labor of love that allows the addicted to read ahead to the end of the story without having to wait for all of the DVDs to come out. Thank you!" - wow. I have been called some nice things, I admit, but "samurai goddess" is really above and beyond. =){*blush*} You are so welcome, and thank you, too =).
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