 nejiXtenten4everz 2009-07-07 . chapter 1aw sad ending like how u made BB hav superhuman senses cause thats just how i always imagined it in my mind Raven runs out of her room and says "Wait!!" with unmasked urgency "I'd like that" |
 Hikari Moriyaku 2007-12-18 . chapter 1I like. Yes, yes I do. I like muchly. ^^ |
 CalliopeMused 2007-05-10 . chapter 1Wow. This isn't quite romance, isn't quite hopeful, and is just amazing to read. I loved the analogies with the scents, the setup, the characters, and the ending brought it all together. This is one of those stories that doesn't stay on the page- traces of it stay with the characters in reading and writing. |
 azarani-chan 2007-02-13 . chapter 1ha! i needed to read this, since you seem to be to busy to write any more avatar (which is making me ANGRY! btw). i liked it. it sorta showed the... how do you say it... less comical (please excuse my vocab, i'm tired right now and can't think) side of beast boy. i liked the whole scent thing, it made bb's emotions easier to understand. are you writing another chapter? you should. AND WRITE MORE AVATAR!
arigato! |
 thsunami 2006-11-22 . chapter 1a great use of his powers to give depth to a complex chracter that raelyy allows others to see his pain or darker emotions.
always hiding and hoping, i really liked your protrayel of them and that of his senses |
 WOPR 2006-07-30 . chapter 1 Great take on the Rae/BB pairing. |
 Rainbow-Jess 2006-06-15 . chapter 1aw ♥
that was SO adorable. i mean.. sad yes.. but.. still cute. I loved how you gave him the ability to be 'empathatic' in a way. ♥ |
 TopKat 2006-04-01 . chapter 1So much emotion, and bringing out beastboy's animal side, too. I adore it. The wording was perfect, Starfire's reactions pure beauty, and she was simply minor. Raven was perfect, and Beastboy's thoughts fitted so well.
*~RoseMage~* |
 dragonsroar 2005-08-29 . chapter 1Deep, very deep. That was a very deep story. |
 Kieseah 2005-07-06 . chapter 1That was so good. and so sad. I liked it. you should add another chapter. or, you could start a sequal. I'm curious at how this would turn out.
pringles, pudding, and hyperness...or just happiness. i personall wpould pick happiness, but they both seem to sneak up on me some how. Oh well. And again...
pringles,
cade |
 The Mad Shoe 2005-07-03 . chapter 1 Wow, this was great! |
 Spitfire F.22 2005-06-08 . chapter 1Wow. This story is simply awsome. I love the idea of Beast Boy having animal senses, and your description of what would probably be just an ordinary night in Titan Tower. |
 The Ryuu Victoire Tea Party 2005-05-25 . chapter 1Very good idea, it was original and well-written. It was kinda sad too, but realistic and keept the characters in character. |
 AinoMinako 2005-05-18 . chapter 1Meh, I'm not much of a Beastboy/Raven shipper, nor a Starfire/Robin one. Too cliche and fake for me; however, it was a decent story. I suppose I must criticize... You made it seem like Raven's dying of unbridled passion for Beast Boy and visa versa, the same as Robin and Starfire. That seemed a little different from previous works that you've done.
P.S.- Please, please update Badgequest! |
 D 2005-05-18 . chapter 1 adorable and awesome. please, please please take it out of one shot...i'd love to have at least one chapter follow up. |