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Hikari Moriyaku
2007-12-18
ch 1,
abuseI like. Yes, yes I do. I like muchly. ^^
CalliopeMused
2007-05-10
ch 1,
abuseWow. This isn't quite romance, isn't quite hopeful, and is just amazing to read. I loved the analogies with the scents, the setup, the characters, and the ending brought it all together. This is one of those stories that doesn't stay on the page- traces of it stay with the characters in reading and writing.
azarani-chan
2007-02-13
ch 1,
abuseha! i needed to read this, since you seem to be to busy to write any more avatar (which is making me ANGRY! btw). i liked it. it sorta showed the... how do you say it... less comical (please excuse my vocab, i'm tired right now and can't think) side of beast boy. i liked the whole scent thing, it made bb's emotions easier to understand. are you writing another chapter? you should. AND WRITE MORE AVATAR!

arigato!
thsunami
2006-11-22
ch 1,
abusea great use of his powers to give depth to a complex chracter that raelyy allows others to see his pain or darker emotions.

always hiding and hoping, i really liked your protrayel of them and that of his senses
WOPR
2006-07-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseGreat take on the Rae/BB pairing.
Rainbow-Jess
2006-06-15
ch 1,
abuseaw ♥

that was SO adorable. i mean.. sad yes.. but.. still cute. I loved how you gave him the ability to be 'empathatic' in a way. ♥
TopKat
2006-04-01
ch 1,
abuseSo much emotion, and bringing out beastboy's animal side, too. I adore it. The wording was perfect, Starfire's reactions pure beauty, and she was simply minor. Raven was perfect, and Beastboy's thoughts fitted so well.

*~RoseMage~*
dragonsroar
2005-08-29
ch 1,
abuseDeep, very deep. That was a very deep story.
Kieseah
2005-07-06
ch 1,
abuseThat was so good. and so sad. I liked it. you should add another chapter. or, you could start a sequal. I'm curious at how this would turn out.

pringles, pudding, and hyperness...or just happiness. i personall wpould pick happiness, but they both seem to sneak up on me some how. Oh well. And again...

pringles,
cade
The Mad Shoe
2005-07-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow, this was great!
Spitfire F.22
2005-06-08
ch 1,
abuseWow. This story is simply awsome. I love the idea of Beast Boy having animal senses, and your description of what would probably be just an ordinary night in Titan Tower.
Ryuu no Taiyo
2005-05-25
ch 1,
abuseVery good idea, it was original and well-written. It was kinda sad too, but realistic and keept the characters in character.
AinoMinako
2005-05-18
ch 1,
abuseMeh, I'm not much of a Beastboy/Raven shipper, nor a Starfire/Robin one. Too cliche and fake for me; however, it was a decent story. I suppose I must criticize... You made it seem like Raven's dying of unbridled passion for Beast Boy and visa versa, the same as Robin and Starfire. That seemed a little different from previous works that you've done.
P.S.- Please, please update Badgequest!
D
2005-05-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseadorable and awesome. please, please please take it out of one shot...i'd love to have at least one chapter follow up.
iamhollywood
2005-05-18
ch 1,
abuseGreat one shot. I like the idea of Raven having a distinguishable scent. The idea of BB being somewhat controlled by his heightened senses is also a nice addition. Great job!
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