Mm, very interesting... Yes, I like it. =D Perhaps the consensuality of it is a little irritating; I can't quite help but think Sanzo should never be so compliant... But that's just me, and it's very well written, so thank you very much for this. ^_^

~*sonryz

wow! u should write more stories!

I can see Sanzo reacting this exact same way. ♥

your fic makes it clear how thin, if it exists at all, is the line between hate and love ...

I've read a stack of Goku/Sanzo fics in the last hour, but I really, really like this one. The visuals made my heart do little flips and my breath catch, they're so perfectly described I can imagine them. This little shot makes me happy.

Well written and in caractor, s great short sory!

Ahh. I think I've found you. Yay! XD What a wonderful way to start out my morning.

the redundancy is quite exasperating, but the imagery is vivid.

Sexy Sexy Sexy Sexy Sexy Sexy Sexy Sexy Sexy Sexy Sexy Sexy Sexy Sexy Sexy Sexy Sexy Sexy Sexy Sexy Sexy Sexy. Have I mentioned Sexy?

Although it's a wee bit short and the "master's teachings" kind of throws off the mood, it is very... what's the word? Ah, yes: excellent

oh poor Sanzo

Can we say high intensity character exposition? I completely believe that this is Sanzo. I love how angsty he is about everything. You've captured his characterization very well. Good Job!

Amazing fic, I'm totally under control!

Very deep. Loved it! ^^ XD

Aw... I really like it! It reminds me of a book I recently read called "What My Mother Doesn't Know" (not that you care about the title) and in it the girl says she hates how her mother pretends everything is okay, but most of all she hates hating her mother.

Not very connected, I know, but that's what it made me think of. :)

Actually I've been storming up a plot bunny for a potential SanzoGoku relationship in which Sanzo refuses to accept the relationship... if there is one... boh, don't know.

Sorry, I'm rambling when I should be praising you! :P