*sniff,sniff*

PLEASE DONT MAKE THIS A ONE SHOT! MAKE IT LONGER! WHAT HAPPENEDS NEXTS!! PLEASE CONTENIU! Peaz!

I really liked how you put that song in there. It worked wornderful with the theme. Yes, I sugest that you wrod your summarys differently. But it was still good.

eh...? *stares for a while before it sinks in* YOU KILLED BEAST BOY! >_< thats not an ATTEMPTED suicide, like what you put in your summary... thats a full-on SUCCESS! aw heck... now im depressed -_-() was hoping thatd a miracle of some sort would happen... *sighs and curls up in a corner*

I really liked this, especially the beginning. The first few paragraphs were very powerful. I got so sucked in, my friend saw me and he's like, "What's your problem" cuz I got so "involved" in your story. Great job.

TERRA FOREVER! HAHA!

--ssj

*rolls eyes* great. Okay, before i start, I warn you I''m the biggest Terra hater in the world and an R/BB shipper. Right.

The idea is good, and it fits brilliantly with the song. GREAT JOB! a little ecentric, but it was brilliant. I've got a problem with terra. AND T/BB. but I'll restrain myself. for now...