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| EmmaHermione1fan 2005-10-04 ch 2,  | abuseI love how you ended that chapter. Maybe... hmm... Please update soon! |
| RipRopeRiddle 2005-06-01 ch 2, | abuseHave I not reviewed? I thought I had. It's really good. Well done. Update soon. |
| Gracie 2005-05-20 ch 2, anon. | abuseis this going to be a japanese spiritual thing. like in the grudge? i like your story keep on updating! |
| krista 2005-05-19 ch 2, anon. | abusegreat job once again! this fic rox my sox so update soon. |
| FlipWise 2005-05-19 ch 2, anon. | abusePretty good. That's the way I like it. Keep 'em coming. |
| FlipWise 2005-05-18 ch 1, | abuseNice start. One thing though. This is my first time reading something with a sister-fic. But the plot seemed too interesting. I think it would appeal to more people if you were omnicient and it seems third person. Not to down-play you or anthing, but it's just a little suggestion. It's your writing style and your story. This seems pretty interesting. Can't wait til' some stuff gets really crackin'! |
| krista 2005-05-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseomg..that teacher wants them to go to japan! everyone knows to not go to japan!! all the scary ** happens there...but oh well, great fic. |