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| Loner Kitsune Girl 2007-06-08 ch 37,  | abuseLMAO |
| emeraldeyegurl 2006-09-17 ch 37, | abuseoh so awsome excellent story. plz make a sequal cuz i want Tony and Vi together in the end. please! thanks for writing. write more real son. thnks. bye. ps what does A/N stand for. u know the thing u put in bold and parenthesis? well bye now.:-) |
| emeraldeyegurl 2006-09-15 ch 8, | abuseI liked Vanish/ Shadow, The Cheetah/ Speedster and Kid Whamo. If u have better ideas then use them. those was just suggestions. thnks for writing. bye. :-) |
| AK 2006-05-28 ch 8, anon. | abuseThis is an awesome story. I love how it's building up, I'm not much of a critic, But I don't see anything wrong with the story. for a name, what about Invisgirl(Invis-a-girl)for Violet's super Name? |
| Wormtail96 2006-03-05 ch 8, | abuseI have thew names for the kids. Invisigirl(Violet),Speed demon(Dash)and Morph(Jack-Jack).The firstname for Dash 'Incrediboy' would have made Syndrome angry(if he was still alive)afterall he was the first Incrediboy,i bet Sybdrome would try to destroy Dash because of that. |
| Wormtail96 2006-03-05 ch 2, | abuseFantastic!although i wish you could have done a little more on Dash vs the Underminer. |
| JJS 2006-01-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseOnce again, I was impressed. Sad that it's over, but glad a sequel was promised. Good job |
| JustWriter2 2006-01-02 ch 37, | abuseThanksgiving huh? I really enjoyed Ur story. |
| NAME AND ADDRESS WITHHELD 2005-12-31 ch 37, | abuseOh, so it isn't the end, huh? Did the supers get re-avalible to fight? Oh, whatever. Nice, nice ending. ew Bob would get that job. But that other chapter. How did I read that? Eh, forget it. Good job. We all loved it! |
| Trashbag08 2005-12-30 ch 37, | abuseIt's over?! NO! |
| SlayerIssac 2005-12-28 ch 37, | abuseNapolean, King of the Squrials : Aahaahahahah, I have now found the world's whole supply of pop-tarts and I will use them to RULE THE WORLD! ! ! Go my squrial ninjas. Go and take over the world! ! ! Gahahahahahahahh! ! ! Squrial Ninjas : All hail Napolean, All hail Napolean. All hail Pop-tarts, All hail Pop-tarts. SlayerIssac : ... ... ... ... (awkward silence) First day out of the looney bin and he's already trying to take over the world,... again... Mabye I shouldn't have sent him that 12-pound bag of sugar... or spiked it with cocain... yeah... Oh yeah, and nice fic. P.S.(LET POP-TARTS RULE THE WORLD! ! !) :> |
| the real Violet Parr 2005-12-28 ch 37, | abuseWow...that was quite a story. ;) But I enjoyed every bit of it! Can't wait for the sequel! :) |
| The Star Swordsman 2005-12-28 ch 37, | abuseMagnificent, incredible, wonderful, marvelous story. This is by far the best story I have ever read from you. Great work. I can't wait for more. |
| The Star Swordsman 2005-12-24 ch 36, | abuseGreat chapter. Nice work. Can't wait for the finale and the sequel. |
| Trashbag08 2005-12-24 ch 36, | abuseOh man, it's almost over. :( Can you please make it just a little longer? Maybe 24 chapters longer? :) |