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| Choas Babe 2008-02-16 ch 3, | abuseThere's this really niice Japanese resturaunt, I just butchered that word, that makes the food on grills right in front of you and there's wood around the edges to serve as your table and there's a nice store downstairs. My uncle took me there once. |
| Nikki 2006-01-23 ch 9, anon. | abuseAnother excellent edition to the series - thought this was great and loved the way you dealt with whole pete thing - i really don't like that guy, but what sam/jack shipper does, right? Anyway fantastic fic - great writing, can't wait to go read the next! :) |
| astareltheweeper 2005-10-12 ch 4, | abuse"Please do not attempt to use this story as a guide to Disney World." ILMAO... I stayed up til 1am reading this series and then came straight home from school to finish! Officially addicted, lol! |
| spacemonkey67 2005-08-08 ch 6, anon. | abuse"Cassie told herself that it was all in her head; that their elephant did not take off more reluctantly than the others, and that it was fully capable of supporting the two of them." OMG I am in an internet cafe and read this part and I started laughing my ** off. Everyone was looking at me weird and that just made me laugh harder. I then remembered that you said something about one of your reviewers licking the screen and I was almost tempted to do it just to make the other people in the cafe think I was weirder. Anyway I have thoroughly enjoyed all of your Brithday Tradition fics and am sad that they are ending. Please keep up the good work. P.S. I am beginning to see why others think I'm weird. Bravo! |
| deathstreet89 2005-07-18 ch 9, | abuseThis was one of the better of the sries and I'm finally read them all |
| BrokenSkye 2005-07-05 ch 8, | abuseOh, I loove Teal'c here! Literarly THROWING himself at Daniel to get him up... and getting insulted when Jack questions wheather Belle is a princess...great! But that sentence: 'It's not like we're getting MARRIED or anything' - I honestly crindged when I read that... The last chapter was great too - I couldn't halp hoping that Magnet happened to 'accidentally' bite something that Pete would miss though... Good job! |
| melpomene-muse of tragedy 2005-07-04 ch 9, anon. | abuseWell, /i kindof missed the obligatory "drunk" scene in this fic. Not even one person got intoxicated *pouts* but it WAS very funny, and charming, and, I love the Jack/Pete jealousy. Making Pete suffer *laughs evilly* now that I like to watch. er, read, you know what I mean. |
| melpomene- muse of tragedy 2005-07-04 ch 8, anon. | abuseInsanely funny. There was one line in this chap, I can't find it back now, but it just KILLED me! |
| sunstorm2 2005-06-26 ch 9, | abuse*happy dance* School is finally out, finals done with, which means I ~finally~ get to get back onto Haven't been on in way too long! I loved the end of the story! (And the rest of it too.) Rather funny. Great to see the whole situation how it was. And then back a little bit. Very funny, the whole Danny and Jack trying to figure out who got to tell Teal'c that the pixie dust wasn't real. And Hm... I can't remember what was the last chapter I reviewed. But the whole thing is very funny and so fun to read, and you do such a great job at writing it. And I do believe (from the emails in my [overful] inbox) that BT8 is already 2 chapters in, and I wanna go catch up. Great job, can't wait to go read more. (Which I intend to do right now, barring all accidents and emergencies.) |
| chihuahua88 2005-06-25 ch 5, anon. | abusemy favourite line so far - "and when a hundred and some-odd year-old Jaffa tells you he wants to go ride the teacups, you let him ride the damn teacups" you are brilliant! |
| Gater-girl 2005-06-22 ch 9, | abusereally good |
| DickieT 2005-06-20 ch 9, | abuseFantastic Chapter. I was not expecting this one. I always said dogs were a good judge of characters. If this is a taste of next years story is going to go I can't wait. How long do we have to wait? |
| MuseUrania 2005-06-18 ch 9, anon. | abuseSorry I didn't comment earlier, I've been off-line a while. But this was pretty good. |
| Katie 2005-06-17 ch 9, anon. | abuseHehe, that was a cool story. Interesting interaction with Pete, sort of mixture of 'he shouldn't have Sam' hate and the fact that he's not too bad...I couldn't have imagine the series ending with Pete and Jack doing card tricks in Sams kitchen either!! Liked the bit with the cupboard! |
| happy molecule 2005-06-16 ch 8, | abusehahaha! :) is there really a magnet store in disneyland? (coz that would be so cool!) anyways, great chap, once again. maybe u should set the season 8 story in the middle of threads, so pete's still in there and u can still have some pete/jack scenes, but pete can still bugger off at some stage |