 closetfan 2005-05-18 . chapter 2I liked the story very much. The scenes flow well, the description is crisp. It is generally well written.
But alas, I started with Spider-man when the movies came out. Although I knew Ben whats-his-name became a clone or something of that nature and was Spider-man, I didn't realize Peter stopped being him.
Could you footnote on that in your next chapter?
many thanks |