Reviews for The Light and the Dark
Star Dust of Ancient Novae 2/21/11 . chapter 1
cool sweet
HellGS 10/26/10 . chapter 2
I really like this story, so its good to know that this is just the first of the series which I definitely intend to read to the end :)
juniperbrea 8/5/09 . chapter 2
I am in love! So well written, you're writing style makes me feel the way these characters feel in the moment! Keep it up!
ibelieveintruelove 8/14/07 . chapter 2
Oh another lovely Anakin and Padme story. I feel so bad for them, but your stories make me so happy, I love reading them! Now on to "Shadows of Winter"... ;-)
tiffanysblue 9/16/06 . chapter 2
amazing fic! update please!
XcrossingjordanX 8/5/06 . chapter 2
Please update! i absolutely love this story!
padme17 7/11/05 . chapter 2
YAY! i love this fic...update now! or whenever...just continue with the greatness
Piscean 6/26/05 . chapter 2
Great story, Shawn! Love the way you wrote about Padme and Anakin's reunion. Hope to read the next chapter soon, so hurry!
Trinity Day 6/11/05 . chapter 2
This story is definitely worth continuing. I hope you write more of it. I really enjoy the Anakin/Padmé interaction.
monique-lee16 6/5/05 . chapter 2
amazing! you are the only author so far who has all the right facts and spellings. i saw no mistakes. it was amazing. update soon
thisisironic 6/4/05 . chapter 2
Abso-fucking-lutely fantastic! You rarely find a story this amazing in these kinds of genre's. Extremely well written, amazing characterization! Fantastic!
Paillette 5/25/05 . chapter 2
Aw, this was so sweet! It read just like a much-needed romantic supplement to the actual canon. I liked it alot. :) Awesome job!

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rockergurl13 5/25/05 . chapter 2
this was an AMAZING chapter!
rinabina 5/25/05 . chapter 2
THANK GOD finally an intelligent, well written, and in character story. i'm so sick of vader getting puppies and obi-wan getting pegnant. this is a pleasure and i will add it to my fav's in hope of reading an update. i'm working on my own ani padme peace that i'll post in a few days. please, if you're ever bored, stop by. i hope that my own tales of anakin and padme will please you as much as yours has. thank you again for bringing back my faith in star wars fanfiction. lol. keep on writing!
Sephira jo 5/24/05 . chapter 2
Well, you have a great start here. You write well and everyone's in characters, kudos. I hope this won't become an AU fic, like you seem to say. Half the beauty of Padme and Anakin's relationship is how it ends. Because hope comes from it. _

You have a problem with tenses, generally when you go between present and past tense there should be some kind of break. But, even with the jumpin' tenses this was still really enjoyable. Have you thought about posting the NC17 version at ? A well written fic would be such a welcome addition. _

Anyway, keep up the good work, can't wait for the next part.
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