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Katlin Grace 2008-10-03 ch 9,	abuseI think that this is one of the best FMA/SM fics on this site! Please update soon! I know that it's been a long while, but it seems to be going so well. I can't wait to see what Ed's going to do when he sees Usagi. I want to know about their history and how this is all going to change the plot. Please update! There just aren't that many FMA/SM crossover fics in the world.
Wild Horsefeathers8753 2008-09-13 ch 9,	abuseThis is a very interesting story so far, and I have enjoyed reading it. I hope you will continue it someday.
Black Lady of Emptyness 2007-09-25 ch 9,	abuseThis is very good. I have nver seen Full Metal Alcemist, but when reading this Fic, i really wished i did. Anyway everything of this story, looks and is great, no, SUPER! The discription you give, gives the Fic more insite and more feeling that you really in the story self, which is great. I hope that Usagi's meeting with Ed, is slight romantic and with a sence of humor, maybe something about the plushie of him being too short. Please finish you story, it would be a shame, if you don't. Till next time!
Lil Angel 2007-08-30 ch 9, anon.	abuseDude update already!! Besides I wonder Usagi will marry Edward though Ed's the new king of both sun and earth right? So he and Alphonse will be healed...Awesome! ^_^ Again update!!
Usagi Uchiha Yuy Kudo 2007-08-22 ch 9,	abusea little bit confusing where the episode was but it's awesome all da same! ^.^ i
Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2007-07-23 ch 1,	abusevery wicked chapter
latrell 2007-07-19 ch 9, anon.	abusepllease update can u make this a envy/usagi/ed story
Nerf-or-Nothing 2007-02-06 ch 9,	abuseThis is very good. I am a new fan to Full Metal Alcemist, myself. Although I have been a fan of Sailor Moon since I was... I believe I was around 7 or maybe 8. My brother was a fan then and I thought it was great so I became a fan... oddly enough I was such a big fan I made all 3 siblings watch the show with me and they know a lot about it too. Wow, rambling, sorry. I don't know if this was mentioned but the correct spelling is "Sailor" not "Sera". I have seen this misake before and don't know the true origion of where it started. Even in the Japanese version, the originals, the senshi would be called "Sailor Senshi". That and they didn't translate their planet names or the moon into any other language and perferred it as "Sailor Moon, or Sailor Mars and Sailor Pluto, etc." If it was written differently it would be in Japanese symbolic alphabet. Also... does Hotaru mean to say "Usa-mama?" because the times she has spoke, she's said, "Usa-haha?" I am a little confused, I think maybe it's a different language but it makes me think she's laughing and it sounds weird when "Usa" and then "Haha" comes after. Anyway everything else is great. Good discription and good enough grammar. I can't wait for Usagi and Ed's meeting. I am a die hard romantic. I hate people and don't trust people and when I am working and customers flirt with me I get digusted even if a little flattered but reading romance s just so sweet. Cause I think it's safe to say it will NEVER happen in reality so i makes it worth while... ahaha. Babbling. I would like a little more information on Usagi's background in the new world. She is know as the Crystal Weilder, Sada and Hikarinotsu, Konoyo. Nice name, what does Sada stand for? I think I get the jist for "Crystal Weilder" but their can be twists I suppose. More info regarding her would be great but if not needed then it's cool. I am more about the romance anyway. I haven't been to any Sailor Moon section in so long I feel like I betray myself when I say Sailor Moon is my number one fav! I posted new a story, yeh shame on me I am doing my best to finish ALL works, and I haven't touched it since. I have been far away from my muse in so long I can't fully grasp it again. Shame, shame, shame. On me. I want more soon. AND IT BETTER BE ROMANTIC! Thanks so much for your time. Update soon. Finish your story. I'll be back. Jessica
Ritsuka 2007-01-07 ch 9, anon.	abuseUpdate >
Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2006-11-12 ch 9,	abusevery wicked chapter... you should finish Without Peers
Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2006-11-11 ch 7,	abusevery wicked chapter
Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2006-11-11 ch 6,	abusevery wicked chapter
Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2006-11-11 ch 5,	abusevery wicked chapter
Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2006-11-11 ch 4,	abusevery wicked chapter... Yes bring in Hotaru
Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2006-11-11 ch 3,	abusevery wicked chapter

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