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skimmie
2007-01-24 . chapter 9
update
Kali09
2006-02-04 . chapter 9
good story. please, don't lose your plot bunny. they are very hard to catch when they're lost.
when are they going to let everyone know? will ron and herm leave harry b/c of it? will the slytherins disowned draco? or harry is tossed out and he stays w/ draco in his single room! just things you can think about...keep writing.
nickainai
2006-02-03 . chapter 9
wow.

good story.

update
fallen-angel-of-repression
2006-02-02 . chapter 9
ooh. it is true. i see troubles arising. and like i said, that was an awesome song choice. it still annoys me that hermione is with the professor, but w/e. i have to go (its super early here) see you soon (and chapter 10 isnt responding just so you know)
fallen-angel-of-repression
2006-02-02 . chapter 8
dont usually review when there are more chapters, but THAT was an awesome song
andmaryssaREADS
2006-01-31 . chapter 9
I love this story. Its wonderful but the worst chapter for me of course was the first one. Well continue riting its wonderful and i love drama but dont put too much drama in it becuz then i hate it just try not to ok
heerosevilbitchyvampyress
2006-01-31 . chapter 8
yeay! gods Gackt is so hott, and that song is like one of my favorites by him!
Kali09
2005-09-14 . chapter 7
Great story. I want to read more. Please update.
AloraBraken
2005-07-23 . chapter 7
Just admit it Draco, you love him, thats why you can't send him away. Great chapter! UPDATE ASAP! (Harry and Draco forever) Bye ~Alora~ :}
fallen-angel-of-repression
2005-07-22 . chapter 7
stupid draco. silly, stupid, honest draco. update soon
fifespice
2005-07-22 . chapter 7
the last part of the chapter was a bit confusing but draco is still a psycho and harry should never have agreed to see him especially not after what he did to him poor guy update soon
fifespice
2005-07-22 . chapter 6
hes concealing bruises so is draco beating him up too? and why doesnt he wnat therm healed is he afraid?
fifespice
2005-07-22 . chapter 5
so hermione and snape then hmm and Harry nearly let it slip will hermione be ther for him when things go wrong i mean draco is psychotic after all
Zesty!
2005-07-21 . chapter 1
I really, really like this story, I adsolutely adore the whole 'Draco's- a- viscious-sado-masochistic-rapist' aspect, trust me I've written a few myself. But just a bit of constructive critism, if you'll have it. I think that this chapter would be a lot better if it didn't move quite so fast. Take some time to explain things a tad slower, there were some parts where i was reading and i was suddenly lost, and thought i had missed a section. Take a bit more time to relish your writing not rush it, it's got huge potetial. once again, love the basis of the story,and i truly hope you don't get offended or upset by my suggestions. xoxoxoxox
Outsider Wolf
2005-07-19 . chapter 6
hey! interesting chappie, good writing!i luv the plot! ahh poor harry, having to pretend...update asap plz!
~Outsider Wolf~
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