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FINALLY an A:TLA fanfic that isn't so OOC it wants to make me hang myself.

Seriously though. You captured their characters well, and it remained sweet and innocent between Katara and Aang, which is really how it should be. Thank you for that warm and fuzzy feeling :) well done.

It kept the characters in character and it was well written but the argument was that she had never kissed a guy... and by the end of the chapter, she still hadn't kissed a guy. Aang had kissed her (on the cheek) but she hadn't kissed him.

But like I said it was well written and for the most part you kept them all in character. I'll be watching for more.

its a pretty piece of kataang fanfiction.

Cute

Great story!
Its the first good Avatar fanfic I have read.

Aw! That was so sweet!

I found this on Avatard: The Last MiSTer, and I'm glad I did! It was adorable and well-written.
Nice work!

i liked it

straightforward and beautiful.

i luv Zutara, but this is really well qritten. i like it.

Even though I am a steadfast Zutara fan, this was a very cute story, and I like how there was no OOCness.

Extremely well-written, and I congratulate you.

Adorable. =3 One of the few fluff fics that keeps everyone in character.

thank you so much. lately, all i've been reading is bad fanfics with terrible Mary Sure's, horrible OC's, and Avatar characters with OOC.The list goes on. but thank you for a break, a good fanfic actually WORTH reviewing. i really like how th character's were IC, and thank you for correct Englsih so you'r readers cold actually READ it. i also loved how you made katara and aang so innocent, and it wasn't overly fluffy like others. *sobbing* thank you so much! (lol)
~akita_chan~

hehe, i loved the fight between Katara and Sokka, that's how it would go in the show :)