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| The Phrenologikal Cat 2007-08-27 ch 1, | abuseThe whole thing was, quite simply, awesome. Perfect, 10/10 characterisation. Which, really, is the trickiest thing of a fanfiction. If you don't get the characters right, it can be a bad fic no matter how good the writing. And I love the sense of time. Mason's first experience on a plane. And the sly description of post-its. And Rube! Ruby! I'm still cackling. Yes, enough babbling. Excellent ficcie! |
| Osanagokorochi 2007-07-27 ch 1, | abuseGotta say--you captured all of these characters BRILLIANTLY. Even Penny, who I only met once, sounded spot-on. Mason was bloody fantastic. And Rube? No one can make me laugh like Rube. You retained that personality of his perfectly. I love how accurate everything is--you have Betty, and Penny and even Henry! I applaude you whole-heartedly! And if that doesn't float your boat, have some gravity. *hands you a jar marked 'grave soil'* Whoops! Wrong jar! *mumbles* the gravelings are gonna get me for that one... *puts that one away and brings out one marked 'gravity'* Enjoy! *skitters away* |
| Child of a Pineapple 2007-04-07 ch 1, | abuseI loved the whole index card thing... ...so...do you think, in like, the time of the cavemen, reapers got their info on rocks? Hm... |
| CatMowat 2007-02-11 ch 1, | abuse"I'm not at my best right now," Mason admitted, scratching his head. "I may have taken a few... substances." Classic Mason. Okay, so no more House but Dead Like Me is just as good. Loved this and hoping for more. Keep up the good work. |
| Emmapants 2006-11-12 ch 1, | abuseThis story was just great. Frankly, I can absolutely see Mason's first days just like this. And I love the index cards, cause I so had thought that'd be what they used before post-its. Brilliant, brilliant. |
| megafan505 2006-10-27 ch 1, | abuseWow! That was an awesome fic! You should do one of these for each of the main characters... well except George of course because we all know how that went. Only one problem, Mason never went on a plane until the episode when he and Roxy had a reap on one. That's just a little thing though. It doesn't change much. It's really great! |
| Pebbled Sky 2006-09-12 ch 1, | abuseYour characterization is spot on; the dialogue itself is hilarious. Wonderful job! - Pebbles |
| unknown 2006-08-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was bloody brilliant! I offer you my upmost (sp?) congrats on this one! |
| ryttu3k 2006-01-29 ch 1, | abuseRight, that's just bloody brilliant. You got Mason and Rube and Betty down PERFECTLY - it really does feel like, I dunno, a flashback episode of the actual series. NICE WORK! :D |
| MaidM 2006-01-03 ch 1, | abuseGreat. Best Mason fic I've read. I can totally see this happening. I love his total persistance with asking Betty out. That was totally in character. Great job. Maidm |
| Chance2 2006-01-02 ch 1, | abuseLoved it. Perfect character voices and a nice insight into how Mason became a reaper. Hope you write more DLM fics! |
| hobbit_feet 2005-11-21 ch 1, anon. | abuse** fantastic and in character and perfect. You write great DLM fic. |
| CriesofCapricorn 2005-08-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseAmazing story. Loved the Mason-Rube interaction and everything else. Just some wonderful work here! |
| Ladywilde 2005-08-18 ch 1, | abuseMason and Rube are spot on!! I really enjoyed this story. I was laughing my ** off... thanks! |
| sisterthemoon 2005-08-10 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely *loved* this story--Rube's my favorite character, and you portrayed him so well here that I had to try hard to keep from giggling out loud at work. So well done, just awesome. Love! :) |