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Ducky'sgirl4ever
2008-07-26
ch 1,
abuseA great story. I liked that you told it from a bystander's point of view.
SaraLou
2007-06-30
ch 1,
abuseThat was brilliant. Just came across this story today (yeah, I know it's like 2 years old). I know where you are coming from with the big giant huge plot holes, especially why she had extra dry ice to flush!
chiops
2006-09-25
ch 1,
abuseI just read this story - and I had to smile through it. It was a very creative way of pointing out the holes in the plot (and thanks for reminding me of some I hadn't thought of). So, more respect for toilets!
rockybudi
2005-08-19
ch 1,
abuseyou made some very good points in that story, and made it amusing too! very good
tenofswords
2005-07-06
ch 1,
abuseHeeheehee! This story is on of the funniest, most original parodies I've ever read! That bit about Greg's toilet wanting to commit suicide and 'Crazy Bug Guy', man, that was just classic!

You have GOT to write more parodies like this! I will not take 'No' for an answer!
scigeek
2005-06-30
ch 1,
abuseROFLMAO!

This is a classic.
niff74
2005-06-14
ch 1,
abuseNote to self: Never leave the door open when reading funny Mossley fics at 2am. There are other people in the house that won't appreciate the laughing sounds coming out of your room.

This ficlet is probably one of the most original fics I've ever read. In this case, it's a compliment... And that's not all - it's got an extra, educational value! Ask Herbert.

Herb: "niff has always been a good user - never an abuser like some people I know. But now she makes sure her friends treat me with respect. And it's all thanks to you, dear writer".
Princess Artemis
2005-06-07
ch 1,
abuseI bow to you, for you are the master. Serious, funny, you manage it all.

If they only knew, I bet more people would be bowing to the Porclain God(s) :D
Maxia
2005-06-05
ch 1,
abuseOMG! You're such a commode-ianne!
Asteria
2005-05-24
ch 1,
abuseHahahahahahahaha! I'd be laughing out loud, but then my roommates would think I'd gone nuts. So, I'm confined to laughing in the review. Hahahahahahahahahahaha!
Xombe
2005-05-20
ch 1,
abuseOh. My. God.

This...this is so funny. I was seriously crying, I was laughing so hard. The whole part about Greg's toilet wanting to commit suicide...omygosh.
I loved it!
CarbyluvYTDAW
2005-05-20
ch 1,
abuseLOL. I read this on your website last night but had to come here and post a review so all of the readers would know what a great story this was. Very interesting idea. Quite humorous. (>-)
Stormchilde
2005-05-20
ch 1,
abuseLOL! A plot I never would have thought of and it works so well!
bachfire
2005-05-20
ch 1,
abuseBwhahahahahah
Frumpy
2005-05-19
ch 1,
abuseOh shit!

This is about the funniest thing I have ever read! Brilliant. Thank you so much for this. I shall be nice to my toilet from now on.

RIP Gertrude and Harry.
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