je ne connaissais pas cette fic ! elle est géniale ! trop mimi !

Loved it so much. i love the song in it too.

I love, love this story like I love all your other Warrick/Sara stories please continue writing about there is not enough W/S stories out there.

JENNIFER
WARRICK/SARA SHIPPER

wo i love laura pausini so good song choice of yer liked the fic to hehe :P:)

Another cute story! You are corrupting my Grissom/Sara obsessed mind! AUGH! LOL, fantabulous job!

I love the story. Hope that happens some day!.

That was nice and sweet.

another one soon

I love W/S fics but this needs some work. The english is very bad in this i think you would benefit from having a beta to read through it and using a spell checker. The grammar and spelling really need work, but i like the idea of the story and the fact it's W/S!

Yeah! Bring on more Warrick and Sara fics!!

This isn't a flame.

The English is not great which makes it a difficult read. Maybe you could use a Beta.

It might also help if you split the story up into sections.

It's difficult to understand who is speaking in places, more clarity there would really help the readers.

Also, no offence, but I don't undertsnad warrick/ sara stories... there is just nothing there.

Grissom/ Sara- yep, even Nick/ sara ... but Warrick?

Oh how i love Warrick and Sara. Please do another

wow! i'm so proud! you know what i think of it, anyway, megara - it's really good. you decided to put it all in one thing did you? well it's good either way. i really liked this line: "Traffic jam," answered W smoothing, without want, his trousers.
i don't know what it is about it but it sounds really...professional. nice job!