This was such an amazingly sweet story! You did a great job! I hope to see more ray/neela stories from you!

I like it! BRAVO! :)

I seem to love all your stories! I truly loved this story! Its sweet!

One of your stories is better than the next... love how you portray Ray (did I already mention that?)

sweet and believable.This is going into my fave fic archive.

Wow. I love this. You've got them both just right and it's just, it's just perfect. There really is little else I can say, except from. Perfect.

Absolutely wonderful writing. Plausible too, which is always a hard find in ER fanfiction when it comes to pairings that don't exist (yet...hopefully). Thanks for writing this.

aw
best ray/neela yet
take this advice people do more ray/neela and then maybe somehow magically nbc and er will catch on

very good. Different and out of the ordinary but thats what makes it good.

This is really good, you have an amazing writing style and you write Rays character really well :) I'm glad you put in that stuff about Susan she was annoying me in that ep with how unfair she was to Ray. The one issue I have with this fic though is Neela sleeping in Rays bed, it wouldn't happen, at least not under the circumstances you have it in anyway, her bedroom is only across the hall. Other than that though this fic was brilliant. Is it going to be a standalone or are you planning on updating? I would love to read more :)

Awesome chapter! I loved this line:

"And I promise not to bite unless you ask me to."

YES bite me ray! Ok I have a huge thing for him but on to the review, I loved this so much, will there be more? I hope so because this was a great start and you wrote it so well, details were great and emotion.

-Isabelle

There aren't enough Ray/Neela fics out there. This is a great one. Your write the characters really well and I could really see this unfolding.

Just when I think you can't get any better, you yank this outta your sleeve...:D Great job, Ash. I loved it! So much, that I acted some parts out...lol...

Keep Rockin'!

I wasn't totally feeling the basic plot. Neela was very in character, while I thought Ray wore his feelings a little too close to the surface. But, that aside, i thought this was a nice story. I like the fact that they "slept together" without sleeping together. And little details like Arlo, and the band not calling the house phone, were nice details.

Wonderfull, Ash! I think you got their characters perfectly. I could just feel the love.

-Di