¡So cute! (the one thing a can say XD)

I've fallen in love with this fic *¬*. At the begining I though it was a totally diferent story, even... no, never mind. I had bad thoughs ò.ó, but then, ou! You made me cry, such a fairy tale. It was so cute, again. But at the end I felt a little sad. Thank you so much!

(Did I wrote anything wrong? My english is so bad >.

this was so sad! it made me cry at the end. don't forget that hohenheim died too in the movie so he would be with trisha. anyway, write more fanfictions!

Like it very much. One of my favorite pairings in Fullmetal ALchemist is TrishaxHohenhiem.

That very nice ^^ the ending brought a tear in my eye.
I loved the way yu described Trisha and the babies were the adorableness ^_^ aw

It was fun that you mentioned the other angels.

This was really nice.

Has some tiny typos thought. ^^ but thats all.
Great work!

wonderful! I loved the bits where little Ed and Winry were being cute. XD

That was amazing. I loved how you basically went through the whole series...and even went pre-series. I thought it would be so sweet to read a Hohenheim and Trisha fic. I just got doen watching the whole series and finally have a great appreciation for all the characters. You brought up the characters and their personalities well. I loved it!

Wow. This is amazing.
It's the only fic that can be found with Hohenheim and Trisha as the two characters.
I haven't...erm...Exactly seen the whole season/running of FullMetal Alchemist, and I may never see it, because of stupid Adult Swim. So, does Edward really disappear when he gets Al's body back? I already know for a fact that Al gets it back, but I heard that something happened to Ed, and is this it?
And does Winry really "profess her love for Ed"?
But, none of that really matters, I absolutely loved how you talked about Hughes and Nina in heaven. That was really cool/sweet.
This whole story was just...Wonderful, and I hope you keep writing.
Are Winry's parents really named Sara and David?
Okay, I'll stop bothering you with questions.
This was an amazing story, you really feel like the character's do, and all the characters were in...Well, character.
Please keep writing!
~~Winry the Alchemist~~

This was really good :)