maa maa... u shouldn't really stop it there... u should try writing either another chapter or another one-shot sequel. it's really good, i would add it to my favourites but i'm at my limit, oh well, i'll just delte one and add urs_

You should do a sequel!

So sweet and sad and cute! I love the part when Aoshi breaks down _

That was long! But SO great!

this should be another series!

Carrie

i think you should do an epiloge PLEASE

u should make an epiloge!

LOVE IT u should make and epiloge!

Nice.

wow that was thrilling and sad and romantic and terribly great! You are one of the best writers I have ever come across!

Fantastic work!

LivEviL

"And I wish I could know if the directions that I take...And all the choices that I make...won't end up all for nothing...Show me what it's for...

Make me understand it..."

OMG! This is so nicely written! I am so happy I read this! You are really good and I love the ending_

i luv this fic hikaru. when are u planning on finishing it? it's just so great!

It's a really angsty fic and I think I'm slightly familiar with your style- Keep up the good work! I was meaning to ask you to post your fic in our upcoming website... The address is yattanime.tripod.com.

Hoping to hear from you soon! Thanks

Sweet, though i'm not sure if Misao lived or died. O_o;; pretty angsty, but g00d t00! keep it up! :P

oooh! beautiful story! me like! )