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Mari92
2009-10-14 . chapter 2
I don't really know what I expected from this story but the summary sounded curious.
You do know you could have done this fic a little more... Damn, I have the word on my tonge, anyway my point was it feels like it's missing things but what, I can't say. I just have this feeling of it should be either represented in another way or that there is something missing. But that might be my imagination pranking or I might have read to many stories/books that I expect the same grade of reading?

The beginning is good though...
Obscure Stranger
2009-07-05 . chapter 2
Funny and Crazy. A good combination.. I like it. Please write more.
Mysterium Iniquitatis
2009-03-22 . chapter 2
hm... can't change back to a guy with magic, then try to get a sex change the muggle way lol, ron ron looking at harry
autumn-annette-19
2009-01-19 . chapter 2
Whats next, whats next?
Saturnblue
2007-10-15 . chapter 2
I found it pretty interesting the way it was going so far. Quite different. It will be entertaining to see what happens next. Hey is Harry going to change his name and everything to pretend he is not Harry Potter for the moment? The story itself have hidden secrets that have many possibilities.
Koruyuha
2007-09-26 . chapter 2
...I know you're in the middle of editing, but are you going to post the rest of this story up, ever? At this point, I want to read it so badly I don't care whether or not it's edited... And it's been a couple years since you've last updated...
(is hoping)
Baby giggles
2007-09-11 . chapter 2
funny plot. write more soon
Little Morgsi
2006-05-25 . chapter 2
Where will Harry sleep? (S)he can't sleep in the boys dorm, as he is a girl, but he also can't sleep in the girls dorm, since he is a guy.

About that charm. Did it break, hence Harry has already reverted to his 'true' form?
Abby Ebon
2006-04-10 . chapter 2
Thanks for the b-day present, Kya-kun this looks much nicer now that we've re-done it! We should probably start on posting the third chapter ^^
Ashleigh Harry Potter Fan
2006-04-05 . chapter 2
this is a good peice work plz update i dont know why you only have 4 review's that is stupid hope you find time to update soon
Lucifer's Following
2005-08-13 . chapter 2
Is there going to be a update soon? Please continue this fic...please...
Miss Wood
2005-05-22 . chapter 1
Heh, I'm glad that the whole thing you sent me isn't all the first chapter. Anyway, I stand by what I said earlier, that the paragraphs should probably be fuller, and you could probably stand to go into a bit more detail in terms of scenery and mental status. Also, I think the transitions could be a bit smoother.

On the up side, I like how you started your fiction, ei, entering in with a journal entry, and the concept of the story does have its potential.
Lunatic Pandora1
2005-05-19 . chapter 1
Hrm, I don't think Harry should be called anything but Harry, as even being a girl, he, or she, would still have the mindset of a girl, not?
jkarr
2005-05-18 . chapter 1
So far so good, I like this story. Hope you keep writing this story.
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