BEST STORY IVE EVER READ! THANK U THANK U THANK U!

It is amazing,fatastic,brilliant,cool,exciting and col.

I know it's been a long time since you finished this, but I just finished reading it a couple days ago. It was awesome, keep it up! I really liked chapter 25, I think your depiction of Will's mother dying was really well done. The only tip I have would be to stick to one point-of-view. Awesome job and keep writing! I can't wait to read Through Different Worlds now.

-Xol

It took me almost a month to read this WHOLE story. Honestly, I really loved it. But I got to many headaches from reading and I cried at all of the sad parts. Great story!

how could you make wiil's mom die? it was a terrible chapter! (sorry, but it was so so so sad!

THAT WAS GREAT! the story was awesome and even though i'm just reading it now(considering the month)i'm gald i found the fic. great job

yo, i don't really care. well, w.i.t.c.h. is cool and all but... whatever.

cool update soon

You made a fantastic job with this story. Well done!

Wow! I have read 5the whole of your story and i think that it is just the most fabulous witch story i have ever heard. Why don't you make a new one and contact me if you have updated new chapters or you are going to write a new story.

Good Luck!

Aw! That is so sweet! I nearly thought we had lost Susan, but then realized you were tricking us, all that was in her head, you sly fox you!

I was just reading over this, and I remembered that I didn't review this chapter! I've been really busy, high school is no joke. This was such a perfect ending to one of the top W.i.t.c.h. fanfics that rules this site! You should be very proud to write like that and I really hope you get a career in writing! Keep writing like you do here and you'll go far. I'm gonna catch up with your newest story and TDW, just wanted you to know that I LOVED IT!

Hey, that's my idea! Well, great minds think alike, do they not?

You've probably allready been told this, but you can get them at bookstores

As the usual your chapter is absolutely wow! Please make more chapters and other stories about w.i.t.c.h i love to read and WATCH IT SO MUCH!