Wow!This is so cool!Susan finds out they're Guardians and then the agents find Elyon!I really like the idea of an evil Will and the other Guardians.Everyone should read this!Update soon!

I love love love it! Read all four chapters! They are all amazingly written! I can't wait until you continue. This is an awesome story! It is definitely going on my favorite stories list! And you are now one of my favorite authors! I LOVE THIS STORY!

Aww man! why did ya stop lol! I love what has happened so far and I can't wait till the next chapter comes out.

just a test. okay first chapter