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...yeah, I love your stories. a lot. a lot a lot.
I love the way your write Faye here.
you just got favorited.

I feel so bad for Faye. Spike is hung up on Julia after all this time, and she is obviously madly in love with him. She leaves hints everywhere for him to pick up and either he's just totally oblivious or blatantly ignoring them. Ah, well... at least this site is here, putting out the angry fire set ablaze by the lack of Spike/Faye romance in the series.

I loved your story to death. It kept the tone of Cowboy Bebop perfectly and all the characters are in character. Keep up the awesome work

~iluvjellybeans~

Hottest. Kissing. Scene. Ever.

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OMG!! That was the best cowboy bebop story I have ever read. I mean really! You have to write a following! It ended just right. Oh god that was wonderful! You don't know how hard it is to find good cowboy bebop fanfiction latly. But you did it! Good job. Keep it up. And there really isn't any need to make this one longer. Just write another one. ^^

Wow. A SpikexFaye fic I like! Normally I stay far away from those, but I really liked how you handled them in this. It works well.

I love this. I love *you*. I don't know what I'll do when you stop writing, so don't! Ever!

Excellent, as always.

A couple of awkward wordings.

'When Jet and Spike had found her she’d never felt so stupid in her entire life (she assumed, anyways)'

"Anyways" is not needed and it's dialectial. Actually, you can cut the parenthesized part out and I think you could just let the sentence speak for itself - "she was certain she'd never."

I was sort of wondering if Faye would use the word 'naught'.

Otherwise... The image of Spike on the yellow couch with Faye with his fingers motioning for a cigarette insistently was fabulous. *Perfecto!*

*You ask too many questions. You keep too many secrets. Funny, you seem to care a great deal.* You have the dialogue between Faye and Spike down to a science.

You also have Jet down. I love the image of Jet chuckling when Faye asks him to repeat himself.

Thought I should make up for my lack of contact with a long review. Keep writing! ;)

Wow that was really really good. Idiodessey. I love it. You really ought to seriously consider writing more. PLEASE?! Haha, well anyway, I enjoyed it very much.

Bravo, bravo, bravo. ^_^

You are an amazing writer!

Your best piece yet, and that's saying something.

Wow-God, you are SO freaking fantastic!! How do you DO it? ALL the time! Wow...I seriously think you're the best Bebop author EVER! ~*~sighs dreamily~*~ So will there be more?? I seriously think it'd be awesome if you did your own interpretation of the series. I'd love it. ^_^

Idiodyssey? Awesome.

I loved this. I especially loved the line where Faye laments about not being pretty enough for guys like Spike. That about sums it up for me - that Faye falls for Spike whilst still feeling this massive inferiority.

Anyhow, continue. I love your work. In character Faye/Spike fic is a rarity to be treasured.

Bob5

That was a fantastic.

This is just like them. As always, I'm amazed at how well you keep these people in character despite their semi-romantic foibles. I also love how you've left this in the context of the series, so it still leaves a feeling of 'this poor doomed relationship' kind of thing, but at the same time adds a depth to the rest of the episodes. Way to go. Really.