lol Did you realize that only two paragraphs of that took up more than one line? Regardless, his end thoughts are pretty cool. Hooray for sarcasm!

I was looking for a fanfiction like this. kudos!

Sesshie needs to admit it. Denial is a sign of insanity, afterall.

Is that an ending? I mean... seriously...

I absolutely love this. I don't know how many times I've read it. XD

Very nice! I love the way that you portrayed Sessh, it's more like he actually would be in the manga, rather than the stupid overprotective "i love you kagura" that most fanfictions have turned him into..

*blanch*

heh, sorry for my blabbering. Very nice story, makes me wanna go out and buy some more manga now ^_^

Dak

This is the one of my favourite fanfictions about Sesshoumaru --> the style in which he's talking about everything is very... hmm... Sessie'ish ^__^ I like sound of that, that's all.

Argh! I donno...was she acting OOC is the price of freedom? ... i can't tell, but if you wanna read another good one, wickid-oni wrote Mine to Give and that just plain made me cry..

No spantaneously combusting! You have to fall of a plane!

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oh yes...

update soon. sad ending...
but then again he almost got sqished coz of compassion...jeez if he dies im quitting this series...lol..

That was awesome! Thats like exactly what Sess would be thinking!good job!

please update soon!! htis chapter was great!!

oh my! thats so true! i just finished reading the translations a lil while ago, and i gotta say... dang youre good! absolute FANTASTIC characterization of Sesshomaru... *stares in awe*

Very nice ^^. It's hard to write Sesshoumaru, and if anything probably harder to write him in emotional context from a first-person POV, no less. But you've done really well - looking back at scans of the chapter, I can almost see some of these reactions taking place in his head.

Beautiful! I loved how you explored Sesshoumaru's emotions and the thought process. Very true to character, and very enjoyable. Keep up the great work.

xD I am in love with this fic! In this unexplainable way... it really good. I mean... there's something about this fic... I don't know... maybe it is the fact that he's a bit softened... but still!
Yeah, it's probably how you wrote of him. He says to himself he has no weak human emotions... x) fluffers is awsome.
Anyways... *favourites it* hope you write something else like this!