 LiRA 2009-08-05 . chapter 1 Aw. Fluffy and and just a tiny bit naughty. I love Alex and Lara together. You should write more! |
 Hieiko 2009-06-05 . chapter 1This was lovely. Could there be a sequel, by any chance? :-) |
 DragonPhoenix16 2009-01-19 . chapter 1great story. Love it! |
 Anakin West 2005-06-05 . chapter 1 Thank you! I was getting tird of all those fan fictions portraying Alex as an idotic, arrogant pig. I mean,if he is such an idiot, why did Powell pick him out of countless other archaeologists? He can't be anywhere near below standard. I think it's a shame that this is just a one off. If you ever feel bored, please don't hesitate to add mor (what happens in Peru?). I am writing an A/L story of my own and hope to update it this month. feel fre to read and i hope i portray the love between those two people- one melancholic, the other phlegmatic (guess which one's which). i'll look out for other fiction by you. keep up the goodwork! Hex. |
 Chianna 2005-05-22 . chapter 1You're teasing about this being a "one shot,'' aren't you? |
 Darlian 2005-05-20 . chapter 1“Besides,” Alex continued, “it’s been getting mighty boring what with not having to constantly look over my shoulder to make sure your sticky fingers aren’t anywhere nearby.”
"Just like when they went blue when she was sad, and slate when she was angry. He wanted to know what colour her eyes turned when she climaxed, he thought idly."
Whoo! This was great, Cendari. Love the description, emotion... and of course, Alex. :) Aw...c'mon, please don't just leave this as a one shot! Lara and Alex should go to Peru together... Keep up the great work, nevertheless. Look forward to seeing more of your fics soon! |
 shauniwritesit 2005-05-19 . chapter 1 wow, this is really good ya know. I sure hope this isnt the Fin as you say it is. They still have to go to Peru and find an artifact.
Please do continue, this is really a good story and I love Lara and Alex together. |
 silvermoon03 2005-05-19 . chapter 1 I really, really like this. It's a great idea to write about Alex, given the tension between the two in the first movie as you mentioned. How nice it might be to see something a little more between the two in a third film...loved your writing style and the interplay? between the two, the dialogue and Alex's feelings that he was holding back. And the end. Nice how he comes to invite her on another adventure to pull her out of herself. I really liked this. |