This was hilarious. The whole fic. Do you know if you can still find that thing that was in the first chapter.

I thought of a funny epilogue for the third chapter.

Nine months later Turles became the unhappy father of two dozen demi-saiyans. He missed these arguably blessed events because he was recovering from a mental breakdown.

Three years later, his lawsuit against Broly for extreme emotional distress was still pending.

Do it! Do the final part! I find this halarious and interesting... Poor 'Geta... oh and Kakky... Revenge is sweet!

0_0 That was really funny ^_^ Poor Turtles, Now Next I would like to see what happens to Poor Bardock and how fangirls crawl all over him :P

holy ** man that was scareyer then ** that gives you the ** jitters no wonder in hell he turned super saiyan

I like where this is going. But lets not forget King Vegeta and Bardock. That could make things very interesting.

*rolling around, laughing* This was hilarious! I never expected Broly to show up, and that just made it better! I can't wait to read more of your work!

NO!! I can't believe its over *sniff*
(btw I got your mail... just thought you would liked to know that)...
It was cruel, unusual
(like anything is usual in dbz)
and funny... a great combination (well, I like it)...
they say all good things must come to an end some day but, this was to soon...
well I enjoyed reading your fanfic and I'll look out for your next one.

Sayonara ^__^

Hehehee! Oh, Raditz is a devious one, isn't he? This was hilarious! Please update that third chapter!!

LMAO ^_^

LMAO I've had that happen to me too. I was playing this lil maze game and when the pointer got to a certain point a big tigger(I think) pops up roaring. There was this one where you had to find 5 things different in the room, and a freaky looking face pops up. Those are so fun ^_^

Another hilarious chapter... evil but, very funny.
UPDATE PLEASE! ^__^

Love it so much I just hope Vegeta doesn't hurt him to bad.

*laughing so hard that tears are being shed* OH! OH! MY BREATH!! Need... to... breathe... *passes out from lack of oxygen only to start laughing in her sleep*

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! that was so great! i've probably never laughed so much in my life! this is so great! rofl

Hilarious! Poor Raditzu was scared by an undead dude in a santa's outfit. Can't wait for chapter 2!