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Benesound
2005-12-31
ch 45,
abuseFantastis story!

I was a little sad to see Harper and Dani split up, but Trance turning back into her Purple self more than made up for it.

I hope you post many more stories, because the ones I've read have been great.
justme
2005-12-16
ch 45, anon.
abuseOkay...I'm seriously sleep deprived now but it was totally worth it, because after reading 'Pride & Predjudice' into the small hours of this morning, I just spent the same amount of time reading 'Bounty'.
The strength of character you have shown in Harper in both stories is great. So often in stories he is shown as the victim needing to be rescued but you have allowed the character to show his own unique personal strength. The way you have shown the friendship between Harper and Becka is great...and the reappearance of purple Trance put a smile on my very tired face! ;)
Thanks for the story and now I'm away to get some sleep...(a quick glance at the clock...wow...1.35am...see what your great story has done! :)
Thanks again and well done.
angw
2005-11-23
ch 45,
abuseOh not everyone got what they wanted but they did grow from their experiences. I'm going to look and see if you have continued on with this story in another fic. I liked the characters of Kane, Yusuff and Dani. I am wondering what has happened to them and if their paths have happened to cross the Andromeda. Thanks for a great fic :D
angw
2005-11-23
ch 37,
abuseWay to go Harper - couldn't help it I was going to wait until the end of the story to review but this chapter had me cheering...:D
angw
2005-11-23
ch 20,
abuseWell I have read this and now I need to sleep. This is another epic. I like that Harper is regaining his sight and Dani and Harper are reunited. But I have to wonder at this stage who has set up who. Surely Harper knew that he was being monitored dusing his hacking therefore did he leave a trail for Beka to find and other people to know he was there. He's a genius so has he made his move, like chess, and planned his strategy? All these double and triple crosses that have and are still to happen...? he he he

Well I hope tomorrow to conclude the story...sorry epic story and find out if my suspicions are correct :D

PS a great sequel
benesound
2005-08-29
ch 45, anon.
abuseGreat Story! I love the fact that Trance changed back to her youger purple self, and that she has her tail back!
:o)
Calen
2005-07-18
ch 30,
abusedani is SCUM Harper! Kill it if you see 'it' again!
LittleRedhead
2005-07-14
ch 27,
abuseOoh things are getting more complicated. Harper better make it through the shock treatment with his personality and identity in tact.
Calen
2005-07-12
ch 24,
abusePlease god let someone kill dani? Or just let some random blast bolt take her out. Anything!! Please? :-p

She knows what they did to him and she's just using him. Come on Beka! Save Harper and off dani!
Calen
2005-07-09
ch 21,
abuseHah I knew that Dani was a ** cow face idiot somethingsomething!! She just wants another human to play with. Man I hope Harper does remember figure out she knew and then stabstabstabstab X 10billion right in the head! :) Or Beka could just rescue him and do it for him!
Calen
2005-07-09
ch 20,
abuseNo he's not! Crazy son of a b... heh. Leave him there, as hard as it was, is, will be whatever, he has to get over that freak show Dani. Besides, who knows how many ubers she's been done by, probably as loose as a whales ...

Anyway, I want to see Harper blow up her and yussuf and all the ubers in the whole universe... or cause any violence really.
Nate
2005-06-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseomg!! i am addicted to this story! after reading pride and prejudice i saw that there was a sequel and had to read it. please i beg if there is ne way u can write more and possibly an ending to this story cuz i want to know how everything turns out. thank you for giving me the pleasure of reading ur story!
Benesound
2005-06-06
ch 14, anon.
abuseGood story. I'm glad you brought Andromeda and the rest of the crew back. I hope they find Harper. Any chance Harper will run into his old girlfriend?
Daper
2005-06-06
ch 12, anon.
abuseMan you must really hate Harper! Poor guy! Are you ever going to give the poor guy a break?
Calen
2005-06-06
ch 10,
abuseHe wants her back?!! What a nutscase. He must like pain. Why's he getting his eyes fixed, if he finds Dani he'll become a slave again and probably loose his eyes again cause he wants to be with her. He needs to forget her, but being in pain and so much pain like he was, Dani being the only one to 'comfort' him guess it did make her seem like a god to him, like she could do no wrong.
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