How sad...
Greed's death made me cry and i made him a requiem...
Nice work! ^^

How sad. Yay for Physics muses. Um, well, this was a good work, I liked the line in the middle about Envy being in "awe" of Greed for leaving and following his own ideals, but then becoming resentful of his own inability to be independent. Short and sweet. Nicely done.

aw.. this is based on manga (yeah! finally! because mostof fanfic based on anime and i want to read some fanfic that based on manga!) because in the manga Greed is older than Envy..right? i love Envy and Greed.. doesn't matter is it yaoi/shounen ai or not.. i still love fanfic that includes Greed and Envy.. and it doesn't need to be yaoi(even i usually a yaoi fangirl ^^")

i love the fanfic.. hey.. is it only me? i think it usually Envy who miss Greed first (i mean.. - - even Greed miss Envy, he still have load of young women waiting for him..)

Is this based on the manga? Becuz In the manga Envy doesn't hate his father and I think Greed was the first born of Hohenheim's Homunculus. Well very good job.

aw so sweet...i love envy verey good goin in my fav's ^_^

You have given me a whole new appreciation for the minifics :O

It's nice to have such a brief yet effective study of a character's thoughts.

I think it might have been an idea to point out it was mangaverse, because otherwise you'd have people correcting you ^^;

Um...isn`t Envy older than Greed?

Eh... I like it but it's got some holes. One, Envy was the first of the homounculus. Period. Greed was one of the ones we don't know when he was created but he still is after Envy.

Two, Envy CAN'T STAND his father. He tolerates 'that person' but not his father. He wants to kill his father and because of that he also wants to kill Ed because of Ed's connection to his father. >>;

Okay, other than those, I think this good. Try to get some more info before you write again, though...

cool...

Wow, I really like this. ^^ It was awesome to see the link to this fic in my email inbox because I've been having an awful day, and Envy/Greed is one of my favorite pairings.
But anyways, I love the mood you created in this, the way you wrote how Envy's attitude towards Greed changed. It leaves the reader wondering what to think of both of them, even though right when Envy starts to hate him it feels like Envy's making a mistake, that Greed didn't do anything wrong. The ending was very convincing, though. ^_^