your stories are very adictive. thanks so very much.

Nice, very nice. Loved the description of how bad his yearning got before he made up the rules. Those by the way were a work of art. Great job.

-Ellie

I don't see Jayne sticking to the rules too well. ^_^ Loved it! Please continue this. I want to see the plans go out the window, and the rules broken.

Moody, tense, angsty, perfect. Very, very well done. I love the line, "You don’t kiss a woman; it means emotional attachment, opens you up for hurt and pain." Just the perfect amount of cardio-indigestion for our man. Kudos!

This is very interesting and wish to know how it will progress. Please update soon.

I hope update eventally because your writing really gets me hooked and I cant wait to see whats next

You never updated.. and it was quite the interesting plot...
Any thoughts of going back to it??

I noticed you haven't updated in more than a year. I do so hope that you do, this is a fantastic beginning to a story. I've been looking for a good Jayne/River story for a few days now and this one is excellent. I want to see them break the rules...ALL the rules.

poor JAyne! But damn was that good Rayne fic! Seriously, fantastically well written!
AVa

please finish it!

I really hope you decide to keep writing more of this.

Huh, I like this...lookin' forward to the next chapter...I'm guessin' that he's gonna start breaking rules...

Hey, this is good- are you going to continue it?
(I am currently rolling through all your stuff...very good)

This is great! Simply awesome! You MUST continue the story!

Love this one. Just thought you might care to know.