That was really, really sad. Glenn is my favorite character, and character death is always depressing, but you managed to write it in a way that I find...tasteful, leaving me sad rather than annoyed. This is a fairly good work.

I've gotta agree with the first person who commented; the look into Glenn's head was distracting. Otherwise, you wove some nice elements into the scene; I liked how you explained Lynx switching weapons with Serge at the end, since that was never explained in the game. Good job.

Wow, that was very good. I was caught in it from the moment I started reading. Great writing!

oh, nice. lol question, is this title in latin? random question but i was curious to know. lol well update!

Well well it looks like you've written a Crono Cross fanfic my friend and a great one at that. I loved the descriptions you've written, I actually thought the way you wrote it was better than the game to be honest with you. Please write some more Crono Cross fanfics soon, because soon I will too.
~Vortus

Wow, very well written. I loved the description. I liked the originality that you added to the original game scene.

OMG that was so crazy yet I liked it hahahaha Glenn got what he desirved though

nice, quite nice this has a quality that chrono cross has.

I likes. You know you're a masochist for writing poor Glenn in such a state, but it's still delicious! :)

nice story
chrono cross rules

hey! ssup? this was a great story,really i mean it,...wow...why did glenn died TToTT well did i said it was a great story yet?

well...im leavin' byes!

F@-q

I must say. Wow.

It took my breath away. I loved it! The only problem I could possibly have with it is that you changed perspectives and added a bit into Glenn's thoughts. That shouldn't have been. Other than that, it was perfect.

I have always loved Chrono Cross, but you didn't have to kill Glenn! ;_;