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| BlackWolfHowling 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseThis is great. So utterly touching that one can't help but love it. |
| Bloodsuckers37 2005-06-02 ch 1, | abuseI thought that was a great story. It was true to form/realistic. It was very descriptive and the imagery was good. The only thing that could improve this story is if you fixed the typos/formatting/grammatical errors. Otherwise, this was really good. BTW: thanks for backing up nkala. Keep writing! |
| Padfoot4ever 2005-05-24 ch 1, | abuseWonderful job! |
| Lewisa Clark 2005-05-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love this story--very creepy and yet touching at the same time! |
| Kado shujin Sara 2005-05-22 ch 1, | abuseSweet ending. I think I reviewed the other one, so, I'm still reviewing this. xP I look forward to seeing more of your stories, too! ^-^; |
| deichtine 2005-05-21 ch 1, | abuseThe hug from behind was just so sweet. I could totally see it. |