Haha, cute plot. I love the little shy look he gives her beforehand; nice bit of foreshadowing for readers who recognize it.

Cute and funny

Heey, cute couple huh? Anyway, i love this..

"You've never seen me checkmate."
Bow chicka bow wow

Well done! Definitely different, but still real and relatable

hahaha! good one XD haha! what a creative way to spend a boring day.. XD you left it up to us how their game went on,.. naughty >:) XD
cool story.. ^^ chess huh? you gave me an idea.. >=) haha! *evil grin* =P

I loved Heiji and Kazuha at the end. That was funny!

lol this is hilarious.

i highly doubt heiji would even want to see shinichi checkmate >_>

(tries to clap, but fails due to a sleeping population who I'm surrounded by) Bloody brilliant! Keep 'em coming.

AirDragon717

"You've never seen me checkmate."

OH THE INNUENDO! I loved it!

This story has, by far, been the best one I have read. Your details are not too "fluffy". The dialog wasn't cheesy. I here by give you bragging rights. Bravo!

... Nice.

love the story keep up the great work

Ah, that's really fluff at it's very best. I love it!

LMAO, I've always wanted to read a chess fanfic with a twist like this one. XDD

i was just passing by and i happened to come across your fic again..i never get tired of reading that story...the fluff is just too good to pass up..anyway,that's about it..bye!!